All Comments on 'Road to Becoming a Sissy Bitch Boy'

Good beginning. If possible add some interracial aspects. It might be a stretch but make "Xander" black. Or maybe after they are caught the protagonist of the story gets kicked out by his parents ( word gets back to them) he ends up taking a room with an older woman black woman who subtly feminizes him over time. Subliminal messages, hidden hormones in food, etc....

Either way thanks for contributing.

with the exception of getting caught by a parent, this is a pretty close accounting of my first actual gay experience.

I like where you are going with this. Would have liked it to go a bit further in the next chapters.

Looking forward to more!

At 22 a recent high school grad????

AHA, a 22 year old recent high school graduate, I thought about explaining that away with the fact that he got poor grades, and had to stay back. But I don't even believe that myself lol. I vapor locked on that one folks. It's my first story, I will try to pay closer attention to details. Thank everyone for your comments and reading my story.