All Comments on 'Road to Redemption Pt. 01'

loved it. looking forward to part 2

Pretty slow paced. You have established he MAY have a dilemma and that is about it.

I am looking forward to reading more!!!

Interesting!

5

Anonymous is just crazy and should just go to a religious camp and get away from reality. He/She/It has never had any of those experiences. I really liked the first story and look forward to it continuing. A 5!

Enjoyed it but worried this will go the route of the magical dick where the MC is too much man for one woman and thus ends up with both women. Not expecting realism just not wanting fantasy.

5 stars - so far - keep going

Intriguing start - looking forward to reading the rest.

Well written and good sense of humor you tell a story like a real person and one who has had the pleasure and experience. Thanks

Great plot construction if the rest is as good I will be very happy

What a complex character you've created! Nick is more than a variation on the stock character from Central Casting you generally work with. I am intrigued and looking forward to the second half.

5 stars.