All Comments on 'Road Trip Ch. 01'

by Scorpius1945

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bigbob2406bigbob2406over 6 years ago

Wouldnt we all like to meet our own Celeste ??

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Very Good Start

Continue Please

mcollectmcollectover 6 years ago
Great start

Let's see where they go.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Next chapter please

More, more, more!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Hook

Great little story, with a great Hook! Gee I wonder where they will go. On to the next chapters...maybe. 5 Stars from me.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
yes more

Great beginning.

Please keep these two together for many chapters to come.

Where are they, what do they see, what are they feeling, where might they be going?

Bring us along for the ride.

Cheers.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Wow what's next for them

Great story where will they go next keep it going

UltimateHomeBodyUltimateHomeBodyalmost 6 years ago
Dont bother

Had to skip to the end after she sat at his table. Waste of JD.

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