All Comments on 'Road Trip'

Hot, sexy, please write more.

It would be interesting to read a 2nd chapter. Once back home getting mom and dad involved.

The sex is written okay but I miss any form of buildup. Its just a few fucking scenes, nothing more and I miss a sort of line in them besides fuck fuck fuck.

Best part was conservative mom aknowledging the fact she knew all along. Wish they would talk her into joining them, maybe a mom sandwich

Zero for me

It's fine in this category. Shame about the homophobes, what a surprise to find them here. I love the way the brothers interact, their sense of humour, and their loving ability to take the piss out of each other while they satisfy each other. Loved the twist at the end... did not see that coming. Unlike the asshole below, who stars down because he's butthurt this wasn't about a hot sister bouncing on her loving brother's cock like the other forty million stories in this category, that's a five from me.

Gay, not incest. Ok....

Gay sex stories have never appealed to me. That said, I have no problem with it being in the incest category instead of the gay category. I think it would fit either category. I might suggest an author's comment at the beginning of the story stating that it contains exclusively male/male sex. Then those who don't want to read that type of story could go onward to a story that they liked.

I liked the story enough to read most of it. I skimmed a few of the sections describing the two brothers having sex. I liked that the mom knew what was going on the whole time. Kids often think that their parents don't know what is happening only to find out later that the secret wasn't as secret as they had thought. This has the potential to expand into further family adventures. Maybe mix in a cousin (female even) or get one of the brothers together with a grandparent or...

You should turn it up a notch, by having their mom watch as they fuck and she masturbates with a dildo, and yes it's incest. These people are just stupid. No one made them read it.

Ignore those idiots, it's incest, they obviously can't read. I'd like to see it just a father/son romance incest having the son replace the mother, in the marriage bed. Just say too them, "Ok for those of you who are too weak minded to actually able to read, I-N-C-E-S-T"!

This was perfectly beautiful and fucking hot

A great twist on the sex-in-the-car story! Well done.

I appreciate the pre-established relationship, as well as the niche kinks involved, and their sibling banter as well.