All Comments on 'Roadside Assistance'

"out" instead of our, "close" instead of clothes are examples of how to basically ruin an otherwise good story. Your plot line was acceptable but botching the words took your reader on a painful trip! Get a proofeader to review your work before you submit it.

Aside from changing tenses and misusing and misspelling many words, it was fine. Get a proofreader and a grammar book.