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Click hereJessica took my entire length down her throat. No woman had been able to do that before.
"God baby, you give the best bj's I've ever had." I tell her
All she can do is give a mumble and a thumbs up. She kept working it and working it. I was starting to wonder if she was going to choke to death. When suddenly I felt my balls tighten and I would explode. I asked her where she wanted me to cum and she answered with jumping off the bed and on her knees.
"Cum on my face and inside my mouth daddy." She begged.
So I obliged and I stood over her face pumping as hard and fast as I could. Then she just looked up at me with those pretty blues and that was it, with her mouth wide open I pumped a huge load over her face just as before, while the rest went straight down her throat. She then grabbed my phone and handed it to me and had me take another picture of her covered in my cum.
Awake this time.
I still don't know how she knew I had taken pictures when she swears she was asleep during the first time and my phone was locked. No matter the case, at least I have photos to look back on.
After all the excitement, the two of us took a shower together to get clean and fell asleep naked in each others arms.
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To be continued...
Good story. Yes, there was some spelling errors and some grammar mistakes but, the story line was great and I thought it was well developed. I’m a copy editor by trade five days a week. If I can help let me know. Please right a sequel.
Hot, but disturbingly so. And it turns more than somewhat rapey when he thinks "Don't I deserve this?" about his sleeping companion, regardless of her state of dress, intent, or familial relation to him. It could've been easily polished if the author had stuck with their efforts, sought out an editor, or gotten some advice. Lots more story potential, given the 10-hour drive, the camping trip they're on, the time on the return trip to talk about their future, maybe getting mom involved, maybe she knew what was going to happen and sent them off with her blessing. Guess we'll never know.
Seeing as the story was published over a year ago, I don't think that we'll be seeing a chapter two anytime soon. Too bad as it was a hot fucking story!