All Comments on 'Rob and Sabrina'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
An inept ending

A very rushed ending that doesn't do justice to what came before.

AurimazAurimazabout 10 years ago

"we are NOT going to have sex. We'll do other stuff, but not that" -- this part made me laugh really hard. In case you didn't know, the "other stuff" IS sex no matter how you look at it.

"She had obviously come to my house having no intention of fucking me" -- well, as a reader, I saw exactly THAT. Any other explanation sounds just stupid. Or funny.

This story has some childish parts and it's all about fucking. No feelings, no deep characters, no plot at all. Average reader will forget this in a few hours. Does the author really want this?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Sex Sex Sex

I tought it was a really good store i just wish i had a cus like this that i could fuck so keep the good stores coming.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Fucking rubbish by A Wanker

Crap

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
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Great first story! Also, you don't have to solve the problems at the end. Pregnant: Yes/No? Leave us hanging (and waiting) for Chapter 2!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
LOL!

Sabrina fucks the family Runt. LOL!

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