by Merganser20
I liked your story and enjoyed the sexual tension. Her thoughts were what made this story erotic and maybe we should have had more of them when she finally caved in to her desires.
I love the Evolution and progression of the internal conflict that they both share though more on the mother side.
Can’t wait to read more
A masterfully crafted story of love the could happen to anyone. Such a beautiful view on reluctance vs desire. This happens so much more than reported or stopped before actually sexual acts.