by cymoril0001
Now, please, don't go and break these girls up right as they are getting together. I love a happy ending - how much angst must we endure to get there? Great story. I'm with you till The End.
I am so conflicted about Robyn... She loves Yellow but yet has relations with others and treats them exactly how she thinks Yellow treats her. I want them to be together but how will that happen? Will Yellow truly forgive Robyn's trysts on the side? Will Robyn be able to be happy, truly happy with one woman? You have us hooked... Where will you take us next? Please don't take too long to get us there.
Im so in love with this story and the characters… please keep them coming don't keep us waiting for long
I think Lisa should become Robin's wife.
Good job. Well done.
You have crafted an interesting story here. I've been coming back to your author's page just to see if you've updated. I've been doing that for months. I doubt if I'll stop the habit. Not until I see the ending.
Your plot is killing me. I love Robin for Yellow. I wish Yellow would make up her mind. I wish Robin didn't have to sleep around so much. But if all I wanted were given to me so easily, I know this story wouldn't have pulled me I'm at all.
Your characters have settled in my mind like they have a right to be there. I hope you don't leave us fans hanging. Like the other readers, I want to know what happens next.
Thank you for the great story.
I like the way Lisa's character is developing in this episode. She's more confident about what she wants.
i dont understand Robins way of thinking. in one breath she tells lisa that she loves her and shes her soulmate and shes never loved anyone the way she loves lisa. then shes between another girls legs eating her out and saying we will see when we can meet again. like ok i get her and lisa are not dating but it just doesnt make sense to me.