by lostindavoid
Love the random weirdness and otherworldly compulsive sex. Please, either slow your typing down, re-read what you've written or get an editor. The many small errors are distracting.
Thanks for the cool comment and I am deeply sorry for the distracting errors.
Maybe, instead of Science Fiction/Fantasy, this should have been in Novels/Novellets, considering it's length. No matter.
For a story line that began as just hot, and it was, it has become something so much more. Interesting, intriguing, even mind blowing in sections.
My third read through, and it still has me wanting more. Much more!
And I really hope to see more, SOON.
Can't vote again but, if I could, I'd stick with the same 5 Stars.