by ellynei
I really liked the orgasm description on the last page :D
Nice story,keep it up :D
The pace of the story was exceptionally good and balanced. The descriptions were rich and believable building up to sex aspects of the story, which, to me, is what the erotica genre is all about. Good job.
OK, I'm convinced about non-con now! Really hot and fantastic characterisation! I need to shower now!
O.k, you've made a believer of me. I never questioned your exceptional writing ability, but what seemed to be your need for a gimmick was disconcerting. (REALLY far-out sci-fi, game-playing etc.) now I don't care what vehicle you use; the sexual situations are SO well done that considering the context is pointless! Bravo! P.S. Why not a little more biography? We're not even sure of your sex.
Would you consider writing follow-trouhgs? Role play and sex: wonderful! You really can describe it! Gratz!
I've been looking for erotic gems for years, and the concept in this story is one of the best I've seen. Congrats!