All Comments on 'Romance is Not Dead'

I enjoy reading your stories and my comments are meant to be positive. As I finished the first page I was hoping that this was going to be a long romantic story. The second page was a little sugary and I thought it ended to quickly.

But please continue this one.

Egmont is a master of building a story with a comic groove through two parts of it, then it seems he is losing interest and more into ending the story than properly finish it.

We readers just have to make do with the bits that he does throw at us, actually there has been a FEW that he really has properly finished and we all have to hope that the next one might be the one ;-)

I am surprised. Really. Syntax, grammar and even punctuation are vastly improved over your earlier tomes. Not perfect, just vastly improved.

What happened?

Don't tell me it's MicroSlime Word with Spell Check.

I, Very Much, enjoyed reading this creation of yours !

Thank You !