All Comments on 'Romantic Novelist: Beverly Hills'

I'm following this series and I love it so far. They're in love but they're both adventurous and I can't wait to see what happens to them. It's erotic and romantic and you keep us hanging in suspense. This is good stuff right here.

I read this author's first chapter and thought it was good. This chapter is much better. The characters and dialogue are believable, and the toggling between "real" life and the action within the romance novel is clever. I'm looking forward to more tightening of the dramatic screws and more intense sex.

Well written, good story, but your characters need a bit more development. I need to see them, imagine them, to bond with them and to care about them.

I look forward to reading more of your work. You are a writer worth reading.

Thanks for the read.