All Comments on 'Roommate Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
where is the ending

good story i would have liked it more if it continued a wile longer

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
more

I would have liked to hear more details of the encounter...

ChokuroChokuroalmost 16 years ago
Cute!

I liked the story, a lot actually... It actually works well with being straight to the point.

It's one of those weird things, I suppose.

haha.

Liked it nonetheless!!

Actually, the imagery was interesting. The whole sneaking under the sheets XD

Awesome.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

Great begininng......hooked already

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Abrupt end

The very abrupt ending was off-putting. Kind of like having a door slammed in your face. Otherwise a good start.

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