by biaznboy
good story i would have liked it more if it continued a wile longer
I liked the story, a lot actually... It actually works well with being straight to the point.
It's one of those weird things, I suppose.
haha.
Liked it nonetheless!!
Actually, the imagery was interesting. The whole sneaking under the sheets XD
Awesome.
The very abrupt ending was off-putting. Kind of like having a door slammed in your face. Otherwise a good start.