All Comments on 'Roommate Interrupts my Butt Play'

Great story, please continue it! Very believable...

PLEASE! CONTINUE! Well done!

Great beginning hope to see more of your story.

Really good story. Well written and very erotic. Thank you!!

Like them both...hot..what are friends/roomies for...!?

And thinking not only seeing and hearing her roomie get off but also surely smelling...

while there was no mention guessing she's natural (hopefully-!)....

I hope you continue this story!

I thought you did a great job with the dialogue, and this was a nice buildup to a sensual friendship these two will share. I hope you continue the story. Next time I want for Mary to discover Anna's scent, how it's different from her own. She was curious about those panties, whether they were wet. Maybe explore that a bit. It would be erotic if Mary developed this little obsession with Anna because of this encounter. I love masturbation stories, and have written some here. My stories are under TaricJon from the male POV and in TaricJon's ""favorites" are stories by Crista that I wrote from the female POV. There's one in particular, "My Cousin Mandy" that I wrote that is heavy on masturbation. Good work on this. Going to check out your other stories.w

Got me hard as hell reading your story wow so hot damnnnn 🔥

For me the dialog was very believable and hot. The "awkwardness" came with the story's territory. Too many stories skip the buildup. Yours was spot on and I hope for many more from you!

Замечательная история. Вот бы автор ее продолжил

I liked the dialogue and the characters. You portrayed both characters well, particularly Anna. My only very minor issue was that for the first paragraph or two I really wasn't certain who your narrator was; it was even conceivable it was a man. If you ever are in a position to do a rewrite, A little bit of self-description might be advisable. But the story was sexy and was a great introduction of two well-defined (eventually) characters. Great job! *****

I think you do a great job with the dialogue. You really convey the emotion of the characters.

I gave 5 * despite the need for a little more editing.

Practice makes perfect, in both writing and masturbating, and seduction.

Moving on to the next chapter ;->

Such a tender and beautifully erotic story. Just lovely.

I really enjoyed it. Able to put myself in her place, even though I'm a man. The anticipation was delicious.

This cries out for a sequel

Well done. Yes this story line definitely can be built on with lots of possibilities looking forward to seeing where you go with it.

This needs to be continued

This is the very best, most realistic story of its kind and subject matter I've ever read -- made me so hard it hurt, and cum more intense than I have in a very long time! Thank you'

Hot!