All Comments on 'Roommate Issues'

by chayna

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MaonaighMaonaighalmost 5 years ago
Well-written but...

This story was well-enough written but not a very pleasant theme. If Megan had been called Michael the sex would have been nothing less than rape. As for the category, I think Non-consensual would have been more appropriate than Lesbian Sex. Given the quality of your writing, I think you could do better than this.

toy4LadyandDontoy4LadyandDonalmost 5 years ago
wow

Please i would love to see a second part

💋toy💋

TSreaderTSreaderalmost 5 years ago
A very yummy story!

I hope that this is only the first chapter! Well done!

germanchocolate4ugermanchocolate4ualmost 5 years ago

Damn! This is sexually good. I hope there will be more chapters to come

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Really really good

Obviously this is fantastic because of how hot it is. But you also do so much character building in very few words, and I liked that even more. And then the way you managed to put together this consenting-non-consent.... Excellent. Can't wait to see what else you got!

ShenthusShenthusalmost 5 years ago
Excellent

Really enjoyable and well written. I look forward to your next effort

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Fabulous

Loved the way you developed your characters and moved this sexy story along. And yes, out of no where Megan was nude behind Aubrey with a strap-on waiting to use it. Aubrey stating she wasn’t gay, but waiting for penetration and after everything started Aubrey wanted more. Great sexy story, so please write additional chapters.

SugarSweetThingSugarSweetThingover 4 years ago
Please!

Keep writing!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Emotional

This was hot and beautiful. It made me horny as well as cry. You are a skilled writer!

Only_connectOnly_connectover 2 years ago

Wow! That's strong and sexy stuff! Great writing. 5*

paulyepspaulyepsabout 2 years ago

Wow .. I wish there was more .. that was amazing

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A girl who likes girls who writes about girls that likes girls. Sometimes I write about girls that were boys. Sometimes I write about girls that like boys. Sometimes I write about boys that like boys. Sometimes I write about girls and their toys. Sometimes I write fantasy, som...