by chayna
This story was well-enough written but not a very pleasant theme. If Megan had been called Michael the sex would have been nothing less than rape. As for the category, I think Non-consensual would have been more appropriate than Lesbian Sex. Given the quality of your writing, I think you could do better than this.
Damn! This is sexually good. I hope there will be more chapters to come
Obviously this is fantastic because of how hot it is. But you also do so much character building in very few words, and I liked that even more. And then the way you managed to put together this consenting-non-consent.... Excellent. Can't wait to see what else you got!
Really enjoyable and well written. I look forward to your next effort
Loved the way you developed your characters and moved this sexy story along. And yes, out of no where Megan was nude behind Aubrey with a strap-on waiting to use it. Aubrey stating she wasn’t gay, but waiting for penetration and after everything started Aubrey wanted more. Great sexy story, so please write additional chapters.
This was hot and beautiful. It made me horny as well as cry. You are a skilled writer!