All Comments on 'Roommate Relations Ch. 05'

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bostonwriterbostonwriterabout 11 years ago
Fantastic!

The characterization, dialogue, thoughts and motivations make this story exceptionally hot. I love the "just out of reach" scenarios that involve the boyfriend, e.g., the scenario where they were all at the restaurant and he was blissfully unaware to his girlfriend's lascivious activities mere feet away. STIMULATING!

Perhaps more on this theme could be explored. I've experienced similar with a wife talking to her oblivious husband on the phone while I was balls deep inside her married pussy. She got a real thrill out of making a clown of him. I would whisper things in her ear that I'm sure Ian would chuckle at in your story.

I like the realism of what the characters are feeling and thinking. They aren't just cardboard cut-outs masturbation material. Keep it going.

Well done! I hope to see many more chapters from this series.

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