All Comments on 'Roommate Romance'

This is the first story I've ever read where the severe typos did not keep me from reading to the end, Well done! Keep writing, please, but do be much more careful with your editing and formatting.

This was so hot and sweet at the same time... I need more!!!

Apologies for the typos. This was my first submission here and I didn't really have the courage to send this to my friends who usually edit my non-romance work. (I'm not sure why all my ellipsis got turned into …. Is that a common bug and something I can get fixed? Because re-reading it, it really takes you out of the story.)

And thank you for the kind words and high rating despite those mistakes. I look forward to submitting more work. Cheers!

This was a heartwarming and hot read. Please write more.

Couldn't read the … story.

Please write more, ignore the anon asshole who said it was unreadable, yes it took away from the story, but it was still really good! 5*

it was a bit difficult to read and you got your characters confused a few times. Also, watch out for continuity. She started out in a dress and then ended up taking off her jeans? A thorough proofreading will fix these errors in the future.

I really emjoyed the story and hope you write some more.

You need to re-read your stories a few times to make sure you catch any mistakes as they detract from what was a very entertaining first piece of work.

Please continue

I absolutely loved this - thank you!