All Comments on 'Roommate Surprise'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Hope there's going to be another chapter

Another great story from m_storyman_x. I hope there is another chapter or two to continue......

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
4+++

keep this going! very interesting

horny2play69horny2play69about 12 years ago

Yes, this story is great - HOT and we want more. This has the ability to go in many directions.

You have 3 horny women who all want Jack but like different things. Explorer and

Please write another chapter soon. Thanks !!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
i wish that was me

guys can only dream of something like that

ipmwebipmwebabout 12 years ago
Next

Waiting to hear the next part of the adventure.

ansdguyansdguyabout 12 years ago
Good story....

but huge tits aren't the size of half a small mellon. Double D's are huge, BTW.

clive_iluvnycclive_iluvnycabout 12 years ago
Excellent, Excellent

Hot, arousing, excellent writing. You do a great job of not using the same phrases and same descriptions every time. Well done, you.

Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
good story

This story should be continued.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Keep writing Please !!!!

Great story please write more !!!

Tang232Tang232almost 12 years ago
WOW

That was brilliant, erotic sensual. Really well written

I enjoyed it.

Please keep writing more

regards

TavadelphinTavadelphinalmost 12 years ago
Yeah - OK then -

LOL just too nice a possibility - tell me who would fight against that logic after that day together -

Well written and thought out -

horndog_2007horndog_2007over 11 years ago
Great story

Awesome story. Loved the way it flowed. Any chance to another chapter, or 2???

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
great story

been reading stories on here for years.... this was a great story, different spin and I love how they are all in love and not just fucking. would love to see how it progresses.... maybe mom could be part of the group...... clean up some of the mess jack makes..... thanks for a great story.... and well written.

Sir GalahadSir Galahadover 9 years ago
The only thing I can say is there had better be a sequel to this!

You've developed an interesting polygamous situation here. It will be interesting to see where you are going to take this, and how Molly is going to fit in. The thought does occur to me that the trio will need some guidance in coming to terms with the fact they are in a three-sided loving relationship. She could provide that -- and would make an interesting equal-but-wiser fourth to their group. (Given her age, she might introduce them to selected novels of Robert A. Heinlein's; he tackled polyamorous households with different approaches in Stranger in a Strange Land, Time Enough for Love, The Number of the Beast, and Friday.) You have the potential for conflicts, and will need to devise ways to resolve them.

I look forward to seeing where you plan to take your characters.

linnearlinnearabout 5 years ago
Lovely

Another masterpiece. I'm running out of comments for your stories.

chytownchytownabout 5 years ago
Great Storytelling And Very HOT*****

Very entertaining read. Thanks for sharing.

Jonathanmartin322Jonathanmartin322over 3 years ago
Is this one and done?

It doesn't have a chapter number. I could go a million or so mor. Well done

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Any time a guy doesn't have to beg for sex (all these women who want his cock inside them) is a big positive. Wow, I can't imagine getting as lucky as this guy, in 100 lifetimes.

G5902G5902about 2 years ago

Another February is coming to a conclusion. So here I sit in Destin, Fl overlooking the surf from my balcony, while enjoying an excellent wine and reading some of my favorite stories by one of my very favorite authors. Thank you for sharing these wonderful stories!!! Which of your stories is next?

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Loved the story, but the girls should let Molly get some more as she broke down the wall between Jack and the girls. Will there a Part 2?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Part 2 has to be written! Can't be a one and done! The 3 ladies, Amanda, Donna, and Molly, share Jack. Each of them individually, and with the 2 girls as a threesome. Don't think Molly or Donna would like the foursome, but you never know. Just a thought. 5⭐

DuncanitaDuncanita10 months ago

I almost feel kinda sad for missus T for being left out..

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I love the outdoors, fishing, hunting , boating, photography, writing and of course SEX ! I have a fertile mind of ideas and have written many of them in my stories here. After 40+ years of marriage and raising a family I'm ready to live some of those fantasies, even though...