All Comments on 'Roommates'

That was surprisingly sweet!

Amazing build up, very realistic and sexy. Just the right amount of heat😉

Good build up and quite erotic.

I really enjoyed this one, thank you for sharing it with us!

I must say this story was fantastic. I liked how it built up, and made me want to keep reading. I honestly didn't want the story to end. It was a really adorable story. Absolutely the best story I've read on this site.

the girl below is hot and is totally right. you have talent and should right more!!!....................................................................................................................................p.s. Shels is HOT!!

I really liked this story. I've read many, and this was smart, funny, and the writing was very good. The wording was perfect. And as mentioned by someone before, the build up made you want to read more and more. I didn't want it to end. I hope there is more and you could be a great writer. A lot of respect since it was tastfully written and had so much story. A very good story. :) Thank you.

-Shelbs

definatly good writing style. nice! and very hot..

By far the best story I've read on here

Amazing! I loved the fact that there was so much build-up. It added to the excitement :D

Hi this story was amazing its nt the usual story wear its purely about the sex,this story has a book quality about it ok if it was a book it wud b chapter 3 instead of 1 but still it leaves me wanting 2 no exactly wat happens nxt & nt 4 sumit 2 masterbate 2.If u do decide 2 write a book or a 2nd part 2 this id really luv 2 no & wud appreciate it if u were 2 let me no my email addy is Ricky.berwick@hotmail.co.uk so congrats really fingers crossed il hear frm u soon.

I enjoyed your story Roommates. Please write a chapter 2 for it!

you've written a wonderful story. great set-up, arc, and everything really. i love the distinction between your characters even while they share certain traits, and i love the moment of realization. what a tender tale; one of my very favorites on here.

this is soo sweet plz make a chapter 2 for this 1 i loved it sooo much =]

That was a beautiful story. It gives you a little of everything. I read from beginning to end without blinking. I have also read all of your stories and it's the same with them all. I do hope that there will be more to this story.

i love all ur stories! hope to see more! you're a great writter!... uuh... i noticed one thing wen readin ur stories!.. its SOOO cute dat u have this thing for blondes with green eyes! LMAO!

very sweet, good opening, I would like to see a chapter two.

That was a great story