All Comments on 'Roommates'

by BBRocks20

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

That was so hot. I'm wet, wishing I had a pussy to grind on

Candy_Kane54Candy_Kane54over 3 years ago

Very nice first time effort. Just try to edit your story a little bit better ... you had some tense mismatches. I hope to see more from you in the future.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Good Start.

A good start, keep the stories coming.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Pretty good.

Echoing what CK54 said; tense mismatches do interrupt the flow of a story.

The "she says 'no' but she really won't admit to herself she wants it" trope is problematic, at least for me. Leaving that out, the sex was hot!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

That was really hot, maybe more character development would have been nice and the no is a bit conflicting but otherwise, a part 2 would be amazing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Damn.

I came three times to this story, makes my cunt so juicy. If anyone has kik, and wants to chat about rubbing our pussies together, and then cumming hit me up :3 "IAmUnNoticed"

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
So horny

Been home since covid. Found this site. OMG. This story had my fingers moving.. Brought back memories. Loved the feelings of another girl. Now happily married but still remember grinding against another girl mmmmm

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

made my pussy so juicy mmmm

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

This story gets me everytime, you should write more of this!

The pussy rubbing plus the nipple licking part is amazing♡

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