All Comments on 'Roommates'

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Candy_Kane54Candy_Kane54about 3 years ago

A very nice first story. I like it. Looking forward to more from you.

BillyslateBillyslateabout 3 years ago

Cute!

Really enjoyed it being short. sexy, sweet and they lived "happily ever after🎉"!

5*-Stars From Me

CwW89CwW89about 3 years ago

Really hoping for another chapter

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Sensational, and perfect

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

More please love this

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

The story idea is good. But it would sound much better if you give the characters time to develop? The current version sounds very hurried

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

So good

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

So one is bigger and one is smaller. Are these suppose to equate to "who wears the pants in the relationship?" LOL

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Frustrated writer practicing. I think I like stories that start out simply but grow in emotional complexity. Its easy to have sex right away, but for love to last, emotional complexity is important. If you have any interesting ideas, I'd love to hear them and write a story. ...

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