All Comments on 'Roommates'

Holy Toledo! Looking forward to more of this hot story. Great Job.

Hmm get someone to read it before you put it up. You didn't identify the character as male or female so it wasn't until he got to the bar that we found that out.

And speaking of the bar. As he comes in with Brian he sees Roxy in a 'pants suit' but then when she gets into the cab a little later she is wearing a 'pencil skirt and heels'. How did you miss that? I'll come back and read it again another night. I was a bit tired for a long story

i loved that !

This was very good for your first story. Don’t get discouraged with any negative feedback. It takes a lot of courage to post on here. Please keep writing.

I am so glad you shared your roommate with us....

Enjoyed it immensely! I hope there are subsequent episodes to come

I do hope this is a series, or if not, you write more, very similar to this.

This was very well done. And told in a very good way.

I look forward to reading more of your work.

WOW! That was awesome. I hope to see more of your work.

This was good. Like to see more of these kind of stories.