All Comments on 'Roommates'

omg so hott

i want to be fucked so bad! I want someone to lick my cum...

My pussy is soaking wet.

OMG! I am totally dripping!

"My mom got pregnant with me almost immediately after she was born." - Thats one for the record books

did she get pregnant? did the family find out?

Oh my gosh you got me so horny!

omg that made me so fucking horney

OMG SAME THNG HAPPENED WITH ME N MY SIS... i gaged with my dick n came in her mouth n she swolowed.

read this story a few times over the past year... loved it each time :)

Very beautiful story! I used to have sex with my sister a lot when we were younger and we loved it! As long as it is consenual and everyone involved is enjoying themselves,what's the problem. It is a very nice peaceful time shared between us and there are no regrets for any of it! We still get together occasionally when we know we are in the clear. We did get caught in our late teens but our parents decided we were old enough to make our own decisions and didn't try to stop or discourage us. Very nice times! :)

I never ever been sexually attracted to my sister, But if I had, I think I would want my first time to be like this. like another poster said "if both people are OK with it, what's the problem?"

GAY

i thought it was good but to short i was enjoying it

wish it was longer, but not bad

what a slut thatsister was no resistance at all no way she was a virgin she knew exactly what she was doing the lil slut

Because literotica is stupid with its silly over 18 crap I assume that the characters are a bit younger because the character the sister and brother displayed were not really adult.

ok but too short

well first thing is do you research second thing is get some serious experience in the bed room,, then rewrite this story it has potential to be incredible with the correct writer

jees cant people just enjoy the story and not bitch

Man, Whats ur numbeer

nice erotic story... but it's too short

stories like this make me wish I had a brother... please write a second part, please?

It's waaaay too short bro.

man i love all the stories you write, it make me feel like i am in the story beside the person

it's all right but you didn't really pull me into the story prior to the brother sister fuck fest and the fact that they both have almost no reluctance at all is kinda weird but overall good for a short read

what a teaser you are,,,,wayyyyyyy too short!! good dialogue,well told tale,,,more like this pleaase! glad you didn't need to use a lot of four letter words in this story,,,,its the sign of a person with a poor vocabulary,,ty!

This was really a nice story and me nd my sis also in sex relation after reading ur story.

I have a saying (it hangs on the wall of my office) -

"Your visit to this place should be like a skirt - short enough to raise interest, and long enough to cover the object."

That pretty much sums up my opinion of this story. Good work!

i love the stories, me and my sister always shared bed and had lots of fun for years.

Great strory please make a sequel!!!

Me and my cousin fuck

Loved the story. Reminded me of what happened with my cousin. Hope you give us more. Would like to hear more about you and Brynn.

Was pretty good. Couldve hAD LONGER builf up

Good stuff. A little less detailed then I am used to but, you definitely have some skill in the erotic writing genre. Keep up the good work!

thanks for the story. takes me back to when my brother was my first & i was his first. i was 16 he was 15 i,m now 19 we still fuck each other my brother wants to fuck my mother i just hope i,m there when he does

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Nice job. Consider continuing this story.

_ im a big fan of yours and ive noticed you do a lot of "quick to the point" 1 page story's and i love reading them there are a few how ever i think would be awesome if you pushed forward with them but other then that i love your reads man it inspired me to try and write one that will be coming soon!

youre not going to believe this.

i was reading swamis story and though it seemed identical to one i had read years earlier, and saw references to yours. i just read yours and i am convinced he was ripping off soneone elses story, right down to the three day wait and the panties. spooky stuff.

Please continue this story love it

There comes a time in your young life when you discover how good sex is. Your story about how these two siblings hit upon a mutual discovery is superb. No wonder it has been so popular.

Short but pretty good, you should write some more

YOU WILL NEVER HAVE THAT WHICH IS REQUIRED OF A GOOD AUTHOR UNTILL YOU GET THEM RIGHT. THEY SHOW YOUR LACK OF KNOWLEDGE OF THE FINER PARTS OF ENGLISH.You write laying close should be lying close------and so on-----I do not think you know the verb to lie

Sure, a story's better if the right words are used, but little things like this can be fixed by editors/proofreaders. It's a lot easier to proofread and edit than it is to write well.

Besides, even though I'm usually a bit of a perfectionist (I've been called "the proofreader from Hell") the story was so riveting that I don't recall noticing the lay/lie mix up. At least you didn't write "stalkings" instead of "stockings" like another (really good) literotica author did - that was really jarring to me.

I am however a bit disappointed at how many of your stories are too short.

I came so hard reading this, that is a perfect situation. Sexy as shit, please write more.

this story rings close to truth; my little sis and I "came together" one fall. the facts were a little different, but the results ended the same.

Finally, one of "_"'s stories that is realistic in most every aspect. And, it is a very pleasant and somewhat sensual story. I would have liked for the character's to have displayed, physically and more so verbally, their love for each other. The story of brother and sister, sibling's, first sexual, incestually no less, experience is a very blessfull and erotic situation. However, there should also be some expressions of their love interest to the other. Woeful and depressing that there wasn't!!

I loved this story as it reminded me of similar incidents in our house. Lovely story. F xxx

I am in my sixties and my sister is eleven years younger. She and her husband live in New Mexico and I see seldom see them. When I do visit, I see my sister as a women whom I really do not know. She lives on a third of an acre and her home is big. They have a very large swimming pool and we all used it.

When I go to visit it is usually for ten days. On the last visit, my brother-in-law had to go away for a day to do some business and I was alone with my sister. This day my sister came out of the house wearing a very small bikini with a string up her ass and of course this exited me. She is only five foot, one inch tall and weighs about 100 pounds. She went swimming and after she came out of the water I got a hard on. She noticed it and said, "Do I turn you on?" What else could I say but "yes."

Without batting an eye, She said, "Do you want to fuck me?" and I said, "of course."

We went into the house through the guest bathroom and she took off the bathing suit and told me to take of mine.

The next thing that happened was great. We had sex like they have in the stories. Front, back, cunt, ass. She gave me a fantastic blow job and I ate her pussy before and after I came.

You don't have to be eighteen to have sex with your sister. Just the right place and time. Any age will do.

Very good story,

your story needs a better ending. After sex all week

I always have fantasized about my sister and cousins but that's it i never slept in the same bed or same room. never seen them naked. Just bad luck i guess :P

I recently had a similar incident; but it was due to visiting family members who wanted to camp outside in 4 tents in the 2+ acre backyard. My under-age niece started flirting with me, attacking me to cause wrestling / tickling matches. Unfortunately; what it brought to light was that "her touch" could bring me to the brink of orgasm, even though I was fighting like hell to avoid contact. What do you do when a touch can lock your muscles up as though going through a Charlie-Horse spasm?.

So no-one can convince me that stories like this couldn't / don't happen. She's cute, 5' 6", slender but curvy, tight butt and absolutely the most adorable breast (yes; she did her best to flash me every chance she got). All I had to do was let my guard down; and let her have what she wanted!! At one point she was a few inches from my face; while trying to pin my wrist to the floor, and in a quiet sultry whisper asked "whatcha w-a-n-t?"

In some ways i regret that I didn't follow-thru, but I don't think that I could live with myself because I think that she's too young to understand the ramifications.

I have to wonder what might happen in a few years!

DKP

My Niece moved about 2 hours from where I now live but keeps asking if I want to move in with her. I want to but I know what I want to do to her so I keep putting it off. If I ever saw her fully naked I would be in serious trouble.

As someone else commented, they are going to have a whole week to explore. Please add a chapter or two or three and talk about some of the other things they get up to and explore for the rest of the week!

You are all sick mother fuckers

Go back to reading your bdsm crap then, I mean that makes sooooo much more sense right? Hurting the one you love? Fuck off and read the categories that interest you instead of sticking your nose in other peoples creampies...

To the author, lovely story :)

To the dude calling us sick fucks; what are you doing on here reading porn and why did you start reading incest only to play like you're offended when you really want to fuck domeone in your family?

To the dude who was saying your niece was 'wrestling' and wanted to fuck you; you didnt back off because you were concerned that she didnt understand the ramifications, hell she clearly understands better than you an this ws OBVIOUSLY not her first rodeo and probably not the first time fucking family! Just as well though cause if you were almost shooting your load by being touched you would have been highly disappointing:/

To the guy who says your niece keeps asking you to move in; what are you REALLY afraid of? It seems to me like she wants to fuck you. Why the hell would your niece up and ask an uncle to move in with her otherwise, thats just odd unless there are mitigating circumstances. Just flat out ASK her if the reason she wants you to move in is that she's interested. If she says yes then its on! If she says no and gets offended you just play it off like you wanted to know because she was creeping you out!

Anyway the story was decent, other than the brother not being able to make up his mind if he was a pussy loser or a family rapist :)

would love to read what happens next between Brynn and her brother

From NW Ohio. She's kinda cute, and I imagine this being about her and her bro.

^ Such irony

Sounds very unreal. But it would be nice if it could happen.

No words... Hang on... Here they come: fuck this story and all you who read it.

Really? Is this all? I barely had time enough to get started, and they were all in such close proximity there are all kinds of directions this could go.

I love a story that's intricately wrought, but this one was endearingly simple with a powerful heat. I liked it. Will read again!

What a waste of time and effort. It started off ok. Then bang, full stop the end.you owe me a star for reading it....

Why is this one of the most veiwed? It's avrage, at best.

anonymous, you are a putz. Obviously, you struggle to rub two neuron 's together and come up with an original thought. You do not like it write something. Clearly you are a feminine hygiene product.

if you spent five min. thinking about the plot for this story it would be a better story than this. it reads like you didn't think at all which seems to be the usual for you.

I liked both the characters right off.

The fact that parents would expect two teenage-sized kids to sleep in a single bed was a bit far fetched and that they would not raise hell about it was odd. Beyond that, I enjoyed the straight simplicity of the story.

If the girl was a virgin, why did she not worry about getting pregnant? She had no reason to be on the pill.

Well the last poster is a little naive or ignorant, possibly a little of both. Why the hell would parents raise hell about the two of them sleeping in the same bed? Thats just plain stupid. They're brother and sister, if they were going to be fucking each other they could do it any time, they both live in the same house, opportunities abound daily! The fact that they're doing it now, in this setting, is just for storyline congruity.

....as for cumming in her, she's obviously on birth control, and why would you think she shouldn't be? First shes 18, not that age matters. LOTS of girls are on birth control for other reasons such as controlling problematic periods and managing severe acne problems as well as other female issues such as endometriosis. Rule of thumb, if you don't know what you're talking about from personal experience, its best not to open your mouth without doing research ;) heh.

Personally I liked the story, other than the boy acting like a twelve year old kid constantly trying to hide his wiener! Just silly! Like his sister hadnt seen him hard a million times by the time he hit 18!! Hell, she's prolly caught him jacking off at some point.

Personally I think your story is wonderful. It's simple plot line makes it an enjoyable short story. Keep writing from the heart, and remember you will always have supporters and detractors

I'm glad no one in the family thought it was strange for a brother and sister to sleep in a single bed together. My dick would be hard too, and there's nothing like a warm, wet place to put it. Now that neither of them are virgins anymore, they can practice together and become great lovers.

This is so close to an experience that my sister and I had! Your story has inspired me to write my own, true story. Look for it!

Lol, will it be labeled Author: Anonymous? Hehe

I really enjoyed how it unfolded. As for others wondering how family could do something like this, it happened to us but many years ago. It would have more common to arrange sleeping sleepers. Especially younger ones.

I liked this story and it would be nice if there was a sequel to it.

_ reminds me of true story...teacher asked black mom what daughters name was...(La_a) she said the dash don't be silent...Ladasha

When I was a junior in high school I used to fantasize about sex with my sister all of the time. I shunned the thought the first time it occurred, but I couldn't shake it. She was four years younger than me. Fast forward 15 years, my grandmother was in hospital my sis came from out of town, spent the night at my place in my bed as I rented a room in a house with roommates. I lay in bed with her and the subject pops up and I confess that I used to think about her that way. We were on our backs as I stroked my rock hard cock slowly she had her legs slightly spread and was rubbing herself.

Conclusion, nothing happened and I regret it to this day.

A truly amazing story!

The simple act of a young brother and sister sleeping together in a small single bed.

Brought out a lot of natural sexual desires, not only between the siblings.

But, from the audience, the readers whom get turned on by thought.

Wishing they where in the situation, with their sister or brother, or whoever.

The simple fact that this story attracted such a large amount of people that felt they had to comment, in one way or another is remarkable.

My congratulations to the author.

P.S. Please tell Brynn, she'll be sleeping with me on the next family visit.

Congratulations on a great story. You will probably get more five-star reviews if you look up the difference between the verbs"to lie" and" to lay." Otherwise, it was a pleasure to read and imagine.THANKS FOR SHARING.

Excellent story!

The ONLY way the brother could have possibly learned so quickly how to fuck so well is if he had been practicing fucking his very own mother.

As to the sister... what can I say? She too learned from watching her brother ravish their mother in the purest, most animal-like fashion.

FIVE stars!

Well done.

Beautiful Brother and Sister making love

This reminds me of what my sister and I used to do. Loved it.

I had two beautiful older sisters, sadly this never happened to me. Very well written and very arousing.

It happened to me too with my sister. She wanted to learn how to kiss. And other things. I was a good teacher 😉

_ you're stories are too short, just as they're getting interesting it's over. Don't stop so soon, keep developing the story, carry it further along. We want YOU to fill out the story line, not leave it to our imagination's.

Anony Mous

In my family the Uncle + Lad would be in one room

and the Aunt + Girl in the other :(

I had dreamed about this ever happening, my sis had long hair & a very shapely body, but this never happened.

I agree with previous comments, when the story just gets interesting and going it stops. If the author is still writing may I suggest you revisit this and other stories to continue them.

LOVE it: ★★★★★+ [5+ (5.25 = 105%)].

My kind of incest sex story!

I am copy pasting an older story:

"ANNE240 over 17 years ago

Like em all!

Just wanted to say again how much I enjoy all of your stories! Definitely my other favorite author! Keep it up!"

A very quick 5stars plus 4 stars

A simple yet effective incest fantasy. We've all fantasized about being "forced" to share a bed with a hot girl, sister or otherwise. I guess that's why there's so many of these lol

very nice indeed

A lovely gentle incest story that didn't need any rampant sex. Nicely stimulating in its own way.

Just a nice little bro-sis first-fuck story without a twist.

Reaĺy loved it: 5.0 = 💯%!

☆☆☆☆☆ (5)

Erotic and romantic. Totally true to life.

I Thought It Was An Awesome Story And The Best Part About It

It Happened In My Family