by YamiAndYugi
That was a real teaser. I hope the next chapter is a little longer. I don't mind gay love stories, actually, I get a little tired of sex, sex, and more sex, I really like some plot also.
So Matt and the narrator are together at last. Let them slowly discover each other (I get the idea there has been no sexual exchange before this). Maybe as they undress and the narrator sees Matt's naked body -- some muscled areas and perhaps some chest hair? -- a great beginning! Please write more!
I love this so far and cannot wait for more. Would like the chapters to be a little bit longer because, well to be honest, I NEED more lol !! Great start and cannot wait for more !!
But would like the see where this goes. Please continue but with longer chapters.
Thank you very much for your nice comments and support! The next chapter is pending and I hope you like it :)
I'm deeply sorry if my style of writing seems odd, I am not a native speaker, so please excuse me for that.
Love,
YaY
great story so far can't wait to see it continue. keep up the good work!
love
Assmany