All Comments on 'Roommates or More?'

That was gently HOT !!!

This needs to be made into a “movie”.

Absolutely fantastic!

It was excellent

Premature ....completion ?

Very very hot and really great all around. I want more!

Simply a great read, thank you.

I loved your very erotic story and the flow of all the progression of events to the end. it was all so normal

and well written! I enjoyed your story.

That is the hottest story I've read here in quite a while, if not ever. Loved the slow and steady buildup. Then Sally jumped in there and, wow wow wow! And you know, when Jake and Megan finally do it, cuz you know they will, it will be monumental! This is the first story I've read of yours, but certainly won't be the last.

I hope they hooked up soon.

One must imagine Jake happy.

Dear naysayers: Who cares? He finally wins her over, and you can bet those two will be forever together because, when all is said and done, they have truly learned from their relationship, and grown into each other. Sally’s assessment of their relationship truly nails it.

Jake gets the occasional hand job for his emotional attachment while Megan teases him by walking around nude and saying no to taking it further. Meanwhile she's throwing her affairs in his face and screaming her head off while her girl fuck buddy gives it to her with a strap-on. I think this guy should put his pants on and go looking for another apartment-or tell her to.

Really enjoyed this writing. Just the right amount of tension between them, building at a fantastic pace, Then add in twists with the partners from the ER and a sister. I hope you write more.

Poor guy. He's getting used and doesn't even know it. Time to get the sister, fucking married doctor fucking slut Megan out and go get himself an actual girlfriend and stop acting like the faithful puppy waiting to be petted.

Superb story

Unfortunately I have torn feelings about this. It seems like Megan is the kind of woman who is incapable of being serious or loving anyone, but is fine with teasing them forever with false promises. It makes me want to punch her in the face. These childish games are so effing stupid, if you love someone, BE WITH THEM. Dont do this stupid cucking game.

She could have him long time ago but she decided she'd rather have sex with someone else. He was "friend zoned" right from the start and now all he gets "pitty sex" occasionally. Guys like that deserve to be cucks.

2starrs

Loved it well layed out and I was hard through the entire read

This needed six or seven stars!

very well narrated erotica and romantic story

A very long tease or foreplay depending how you look at. Friends with benefits buy more than that I'm sure. Good writing.

Loved it, the emotional aspect added to it for me.

Sad that apparently the doctor was bigger ahaha, but I absolutely adored the epic emotional aspect of this story alot! And I think I rather liked Sally too, at least he got plenty of sexual satisfaction with Sally <3 Megan was kinda weird about their relationship at times, but at least she let him be with Sally :) And she wasn't as against a 'them' at the end.

🔥🔥🔥

Excellent story. I look forward to more..

Its a wonderful story of 'friendship with benefits' gradualism. Great (s)expectations? Is American people awakening towards European openess to sexuality? (What is described as 'decadence'?)

While a conservative minority remain Cromwellian/Puritan hypocrites.

At leasttag your story right. The dude is a cuck and the ginger whore has no respect for him. If he had any pride he would have evicted her the moment she started detailing how she gets railed bu strangers but can't be bothered to throw him a bone. Loser.

This was by far one of the most erotic and enjoyable stories in every way that I've read here, kudos to the writer, and to all the people involved.

A fellow MA resident 35 miles south of Somerville.

It's a cute story. Thanks. : )

I know its fiction but having a naked female roommate would most definitely lead to sex in reality.

4 stars , I hate suggestive endings.

I loved the story, fell a bit sad, because I believed she would leave him. But the ending suggesting they will get there eventually was okay. It would have been a lot better, if they did take that extra step. You could have continued writing, because she wouldn't have sex anymore with anyone else, and would get more and more horny in time.

But then still 5 stars...

Reread. Still enjoyed it very much, still a five.

This doesnt deserve the high rating

Hope this gets a sequel some day. Poor Jake has been blue balled for over a decade!

This was a great story! Thank you for posting it.

Love it

I liked the story a lot, especially the fact that Megan has more depth than most erotica women.

One thing has annoyed me, though: Of course many men clean their dick after peeing! Having piss in your pants is yucky.

So glad I got to read it again. 🙌

Don't listen to the haters who are looking for a story to jerk off to. This was a well thought out, well written story.

This is a cuckold (which we don't like) story, misleadingly disguised as something more - it needs a separate tag. Megan is a cynical hypocritical teasing b***h, who talks the romantic sexy talk but it really only a choosy slut.

Meh

Not every erotic story has to touch every formulaic blow job, pussy licking, vaginal, anal, wash and repeat. Creating sexual tension is good too. Besides the Irish Twin sister does get the full treatment. The nature of short story writing usually includes something unfulfilled, suggested for future or an ending with a twist.

This was the first story I read on this site about a decade ago. Still enjoyed reading it today.

I gave it a 5 star rating only to find this tale of unrequited love, lust and teasing is unfinished. Or it was finished with a “Oh maybe down the line something may or may not happen but don’t bet on it.” WTF.

This is really a cuckold story and I didn’t see it in the tags. At the end she admits she fucks everyone but him for sexual satisfaction and uses, emphasis on USES him for emotional satisfaction/gratification. So that’s a cuck right there. Half way through when she said she fucks others and is bringing a chick around well that’s ok since it wasn’t quite there between them at the time. BUT BUT BUT when she straight up admitted it using the exact words, well that’s when he became the cuck and was being used for sure. He was being used because the cuckolding was definitely not consensual since he sure as Hellhiem didn’t want others touching her.

You bring us to this point and no consummation!!! Not good!!

Unique story!

It was pretty well written, the ending is quite anticlimactic however

This story needs a follow up

If you can add tags to your stories, can you please add cuckold because that's what the story has in it and nothing against that fetish but I don't like reading it and so I tend to avoid stories with that tag and when it's thrown into a story that doesn't have that tag, it's kind of frustrating

Absolutely erotic! Great masturbation material. I need there to be a second chapter. Thanks

Literally complete dogshit. If you can't say you're a cuck right off the bat you should stop writing.

"I love you so much babe, you're the most amazing person ever. We can't have sex though because that would ruin what we have. Now just be a good boy and sit here liatening while I go get my ass blasted by some rando I just met 'kay? When he's gone I'll come in and tell you all the details.''

That's basically this whole story, which is fine if you're into that sort of thing but maybe put a disclaimer at the start that your main characters are a pathetic cuck and a teasing slut so people know to avoid it if they aren't into that.

Very enjoyable 5star thanks

It would have been better with a good I love you fuck for an ending instead of a lead me on ending. never the less, a good story and I give it 5 stars.

A follow up...it needs a follow up

Good story. Had kind of a hard time excepting the relationship. It was different for sure but the story was well written. Good read.

Excellent story..it definitely needs more chapters! I really get into these stories(well the well written ones)..and it would be a shame for these two not to become full blown lovers, they have a special bond and trust between each other,not to mention the utmost respect for each other. This story begs to end with them becoming a real couple and sharing their lives together(along with several visits from sally) !

Wow I read most of these comments honestly more Tha 40% rag that the guy is spineless. Maybe so but look at that catagory. Kink shaming is pointless. I found this story well crafted and well written. I enjoyed it even thought exhibition&voyeurism is not my thing. I agree with the sentiment that there should at least be a second chapter even thought this is fine as a stand alone. 5 stars from me

Good story, very enjoyable. However, their life together was what I was waiting for in a new chapter(s)..

Ahh, as my yearly beach trip is coming to an end, I have just enjoyed reading my all time favorite story! Again, thank you for sharing this wonderful story!!!

This story was amazing, would absolutely love to see more chapters of them!

I have had differ types of relationships with roommates. Both male and female. I had sex with most of them few just oral . Also 3 ways with them . I understand how u can have feels for them it hot wild sex most of the time. Never more then sex for me .

Ch.2 he either finally gets Meg or Sally.... come on.

I will admit that I loved this story the first time that I read it. Since then I have read it a few more times. But this time it kind of hurt to read it.

Meg was correct in that she wasn't a nice person, telling him that she loved him and they telling him about all the sex she was having, flaunting a lesbian lover in his face. Sure Sally came into the picture, but she tortured him.

A very well written story the has earned the highest rating, but seriously Meg is a bitch and he deserves a lot better than her...

That said, someone should write and end that either brings them together properly or has him end up with someone who respects him...

I loved this story. I thought it was hurtful to tell him about her daliences and flaunting her girlfriend in front of him but I can see it may have been a test. She wanted to see how jealous or possessive he might be. I thought the most erotic part was the first time the sisters worked him over and shared his orgasm. Now that was sooooo hot.

Great story until once again a woman is shamed for having pubic hair and then because someone else told someone to shave it they do. Even worse one of characters works in emergency medicine. This story inadvertently body shames pubic hair again. The writer waxes on about how besiege and silken the curls only to remove them. This is crazy and conflicted. Leave hair alone. Do we strip leaves of trees? No. Is it really cleaner ? No actually it isn’t. Body shaming sucks. This characters “sister ?” Shamed her for her bush , her jungle as said to her. So she hacked it off. Ridiculous. Do women go around with high and right marine core hair cuts ? No. So why do people insist they do that to their mons pubis. Hair is a protective barrier. Leave it the hell alone. Admire appreciate let it be and quit shaming women into trimming , shaving , or waxing it all off like something wrong with it.

You ruined it when you had her telling him about having sex with other people in detail on some cuck shit

One of the best stories I've read here.

This has inspired me to wear very little or nothing around the house. Guaranteed my man will suck my tit or grab my ass. I never complain when it leads to something more. I am always fucking horny so it’ll be fun to tease him and watch his cock grow! I may just have to leave the blinds open now and then so the neighbors get a show. Thanks for the steamy, fun story and the hot ideas you gave me. My pussy is wet after reading it and anticipating my future adventures.

Was going great, but then was ruined when Megan turned out to be a slut. Story made zero sense from then onwards. All the stuff with the sister isn't sexy at all when I was invested in the relationship with megan. Reminds me of some netorare or cuck type material.

i live near the place. Even though fiction, i have found that Irish girls are repressed as teens then go nuts in their 20s with everything but intercourse. Sucking cock, rolling balls in mouth, semen all on face and mouth they seem to be over the top. To have 2 is a fantasy but they stll would not fuck

Superb slow elevation of the sexual tension between Jake and Megan, interspersed with some ultra-hot sex and playtimes.

It cries out for a sequel telling us how the relationship develops.

Excelent writing, sexy suspense and interesting for the events withheld. Like I want to know what happens next. Great idea to have a character flaw in Megan. Humanizing. Thanks!

#storiesthatendtoosoon

Totally brilliant, the tension just keeps mounting throughout. I normally only read 2 pagers but this was exceptional. As a writer I know how much comments are appreciated so 5 stars from me!

Orie, you have managed with good writing to make something that is both classic romance and a very spicy tale. I am amused by the gripes from two ends of the spectrum; those who I assume are feminine don't seem to 'get off' without the couple declaring undying love as the camera pans to the sunset. Meanwhile, the macho men are hungry for you to have the main male 'bang that teasing beyoch until she knows what she has been missing.' Proves that we mostly make love to our own fantasies. I stand with the rest of the readers who love the ride we've been on.

I grey rock when she tells me about Dr. Big cock like a self respecting man. She is out when the lease is up. Why are half the stories on here spineless men.

should have ended in them having sex, and saying I love you....

Too bad...

But then this is voyeur section, first time I read it, I won't be reading that category anymore....

Well crafted, but...left me sad for both of them.

I read this story a year ago and thought it was good, after reading other stories here I'm not that impressed with this story. The male was a wimp and the woman an emotional cripple.

Absolutely loved it .... Couldn't stop reading from start till end... Hopefully there's more

Is there another part

Wow! Incredible story!

Great story. Sure, Megan's refusal to have intercourse is puzzling since she seems hot for his body. The way Sally came around to their living arrangement was encouraging and she provided some needed relief for poor Jake. This story begs for a "Part 2", to see if Jake ends up with Sally or Megan -- or possibly someone else. Also, maybe some background info to find out more about Megan's past. She seems to run hot and cold. Flirty and touchy-feely, but no sex so far, even with an obvious emotional attachment. (Sally noticed this strong attachment.) There are many possibilities to explore in a "Part 2".

Absolutely fantastic read. Five stars times two. Thanx 4 sharing

The most erotic story I've read till now. All foreplay by words and I kept reading to know when real action will take place and Meg will be ravished or will ravish him. Gave such a painful hardon. Keep going.

Dawm... All that building... But I am certain that they will not be good together. She is too wild free to be a only one relationship... He will be faithfull to her, but she will break his heart once she decide to fuck another guy, or girl...

This may be the best erotic writing I have Enjoyed Here,!,

Sweet ending

I feel like I'd get too jealous and kill Gina

To me it’s not resolved, although I get it you want to leave it to the reader but after all that build up…. Lol. Otherwise we’ll done.

This dude is down bad. 😂

I simply loved the twists and turns. Every time I thought I knew where the story was headed, you tricked me. Throughout, though, the story just made me smile (and turned me on.)

This story was great and told very well. i don't think Megan is a one person gal though. Very well told with just the correct amount of tempo.

Wonderful, creative, and not too drawn out. Descriptive from both points of view. It'll come to me!

Put her ass in the street. She fucks everything that walks, male and female. She leads him on in guise of caring for him. What a BITCH!!

So, Megan-slut strings along loser wimp while she fucks anything that moves, including the predictable lesbian co-worker and the stereotype big black cock, and rubs his nose in it. Captain jerk-off just shrugs it all off. Good Lord - does this loser have one ounce of dignity or self-respect in his entire pathetic body? I guess she figures that giving loser-wimp an occasional handjob on the couch is easier than finding another roommate willing to put up with her.

It's only after Megan-slut's sister Sally jumps all over his pole that she even hints at a relationship. He's a pathetic wimp, she's a self-centered slut, and Sally, the only one in the story that's honest about herself, will end up forgotten by loser wimp because Megan-slut steps up the teasing a notch out of jealousy.

On the bright side - at least he'll never catch an STD from her...

Yet again, another February spent at the beach is coming to an end and this day is all about a well established tradition. I always spend this day at the condominium over looking a beautiful beach, sipping a wonderful glass of wine, and reading my all time favorite story. I always spend this week rereading my favorite stories and this story still remains as my absolute favorite!!! (I looked for my past comments about this story — I apologize, but I was certain that I have always commented when I read this spectacular story)!!!

Great story! 2nd reading was every bit as good as the 1st.