All Comments on 'Root and Sexy Sandy the Painter'

Root - what a great time. love the sex, the tease, all of it. Well done!!!

5 stars

A nice, if unoriginal, fantasy.

If fantasy strays too far from reality it can become risible-which ain't good. 'Rivers of cum'- quite absurd.

If you decide to change the story from the first person to the third while creating it you MUST get someone else to check that it has been done thoroughly. This was just careless.

"...his pecker's shaft."

Wait...WHAT? One and same.