All Comments on 'Rope Marks'

Mostly excellent. I'm glad you had her acknowledge her hypocrisy about cheating, and that you eliminated that issue. I could have done without the whore crap. It was not needed to add any intensity to the moment. You had that well developed already. It diminished his power fulness as a dominant, and cheapened the draw between them, to toss in such a lazy and lowbrow device. Both Gil the writer and Gil the dominant can do better.

I have to disagree with the other comment. I quite enjoyed the whore bit. When I'm on the cusp of full surrender, being called my lovers little whore completely sends me over the edge. I loved this, 5*.

A sub with a brain! Please give us more.

Unexpected joy of "having her pussy stretched wider than ever experienced...then deeper still." Lovely way to begin a wine tasting. Enjoy your work.