All Comments on 'Rory and Sebastian'

its pretty brillant you know...

Looking forward to it...

Plz do continue..

*L*

seriously good, don't leave it there...

Very believable and funny. Well done!

'today was really special' lol Tell us more of their story

This was the start of something "special". Would love to see how the Josh, Rory, Seb menage plays out and who come out on top.

Thanks everyone. I've just finished part 2 and it should be up soon. It's short and sweet, then it'll be a long chapter 3! Thank you so much and glad you enjoyed it.

Once the sex starts with a clingy person, they are sooo hard to gie upor get rid of w/o being mean.

You are a great writer my dear. Good job!

EXCELLENT

I am picturing Rory as a young Rupert Everett a la Another Country. Great story!

Well we do know now :)

The only thing I didn't like was using ' ' instead of the proper " " for speech, it really irked me. Other than that, I liked this!

That ending is soooooo good. Had me laughing hysterically for hours.

Looks as if it's going to be good. I Love the high standard of your writing! No spelling or grammar mistakes.

The characters are So True to Life (I speak from experience as a gay American who did two degrees in the UK).