Rose

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Judy nodded against my chest. "Yeah," she said between sobs. "I just...need a moment. Can you just hold me for now?"

I complied, wrapping my arms around her, smothering her with my weight and warmth. I ran my fingers through her hair and let her cry against my chest. "It's ok." I whispered "It's ok."

After an eternity and a day, Judy released her hold on me, pulling back so our eyes could meet. "You ok?" I asked.

"Yeah, it was just really intense." Judy replied with a nod, wiping a tear from her eye. "I've never cum so hard in my life. But I liked it. It was the best sex I've ever had in my life. It felt like I was waking up. Like this whole new world was being introduced to me. I loved every minute of it."

She cupped my face and brought me in for a kiss. A light passionate kiss. One that I responded to in kind, reigning in my need for more. Eventually, the kiss ended, and Judy broke away from me, smiling slightly.

"So, what now?" I asked.

Judy smiled. "I think I'd like to shower and afterwards, I want to watch a movie with you, while cuddling."

I grinned. There were still a lot of things I needed to work out. My feelings for Judy, that blind date that Cassie wanted to set me up with, being chief among them. But for now, those things could wait.

"Sounds like a plan."

A/N: Never thought I'd write a Nude Day Story and truth be told, this story was never supposed to be a Nude Day story. But after rereading it, I felt that it fit in with the theme to a certain degree. I hoped you all enjoyed reading it. Reviews are always welcome (They motivate me to write more)

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AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Unfinished sorry gave 3 stars

cfumagocfumagoabout 1 year ago
Enjoyable.

I really enjoyed the story and your writing: it seems effortless (so I know it isn't) and realistic. Whether or not you follow with a second part, it does seem unfinished. I would enjoy a further episode or a conclusion. Yes, I know it is only a story but you are so good at it that I encourage you, please do.

Regardless, please keep writing.

roveroneroveroneover 1 year ago

Great!

C cups are nothing to sneeze at, and the finger fuck was very hot...

He's still even thinking about the set-up date by Cassie-?? That would kill her-!

Don't think being a good slut equals a dom/sub relationship...but they're playing it by ear as they go along

was disappointed she shaved what was probably/hopefully a lush ebony muffin...I always prefer women that keep if natural ...

easy 5

SeaReaderSeaReaderabout 2 years ago

Really wanting Rose 2!!!

But the whole Sir thing seems out if character for him. He's finally done some introspection, but wants to be her Master, or role-play, when they are just starting intimacy? It just rubs the wrong way, rings false, makes one hesitate to like him. Sounds self-serving (for him), or like you are trying to appeal to a BDSM demographic. Otherwise, am really enjoying the story, characters, and action.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Great character development, although as noted there are some inconsistencies. Editors will take you to the next level.

Radomir1Radomir1over 2 years ago

Really?

He's known her for 10 years?

At least 4 at university and they've been living in the same apartment for 6 years. And in that time he hasn't seen her naked? He hasn't seen her in her panties and bra? He says he even went on dates with her. And they didn't even kiss?

I think to be more realistic, you'd have to say it's about five years. And the events take place six months or a year after they started living in the same apartment.

Her conversation is more like a confession, and her behavior more like an attempt to seduce him after watching him for a long time and learning about his sex life.

Well, she's a scientist and used to analyzing everything.

It's not a revelation of Judy's sexuality, but a subtle seduction of the main character.

K_DesireK_Desirealmost 3 years ago

We need a chapter 2 for sure. Hope it doesn't end here!

Ravey19Ravey19almost 3 years ago

I don't think this is finished. As other comments say there's bit missing but as it stand still a very good story full of interesting details. Calling him Sir should have been carried all through the story when not using her safe word. You raised the outstanding question yourself so I do wish you wrote the sequel it needs and deserves.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

This was great, left me soaked and tingling for more. Why doesn't he go shower with her? And carry her into her room and gently lay her down on her bed, kiss her deeply. Let those kisses travel down to her neck, then each breast, down her stomach and onto her clit. She needs that experience as well, the movie can wait ;)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Almost good. I can understand what you were trying to achieve and you almost got it right but, the "call me Sir " was rather ridiculous and you lost a lot of credibility there. You also failed to lick her pussy, that was way overdue.

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