All Comments on 'Rose and Olivia Pt. 03'

I found this story by accident. It could easily have made a stand-alone without splitting it into three chapters---this is not a criticism, just an observation. It was an enjoyable tale, you've obviously got the ability to write well and you have, as you said in your biographical notes, "...desire to weave [your] words for our pleasure..." So why, kittykat, o cailin milis Eireannach, did you stop writing after this one effort? I'm sure you could have become a popular writer on this site. If you're still out there, kittykat, have another try at writing for Literotica---I'd certainly like to see more from you.

Have to agree 100% with Maonaigh on this one.

It had SOOOOO much potential as did kittykat as a writer for this site.

I also agree this could have been a single episode in what was shaping up to be a great series.