Rose Ch. 16-20

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"Anything, baby. Just fuck me."

I moved up, straddling his hips and facing him I reached back and held that magnificent rod up to my needy slit. I moved it around as I watched him struggle with the need to push up into me, finally moaning in pleasure as I dropped down enough for the head to go in. "Calm, baby. Keep that heart rate down." Every time his pulse went up I'd freeze, if it hit a hundred I'd pull off him until he calmed down again. It took a good five minutes before I was fully seated on him. I was impressed, he hadn't tried to push into me yet.

"Are you enjoying this, baby?"

"Except the plug, yes."

"Really? I thought you'd like this." I reached down and pulled the plug out just a bit before letting it slide back in. I could feel his cock twitch in me, he didn't want to admit it but I knew it felt good. When his pulse rate slowed, I turned the knob on the bottom of the plug.

He bucked into me as the vibrating butt plug started to pulse. "What the fuck? ROSE!" His pulse rate spiked up to a hundred and twenty, so I lifted myself off him.

"Calm down, baby, and I told you not to buck up into me. I don't want you hurting yourself."

"Turn it OFF! Please!"

"No." I got off the bed, moving over to the table I grabbed a couple ice cubes from the cup. Getting my hand good and cold, I smirked as he screamed like a girl when the cold cubes touched his balls. "You need to behave, Gunny, and do what your mate says. Learn this lesson now while it's mostly pleasant." I moved the cubes around until he forced himself to stop moving, then I pulled my hand away. "Better."

"Let me go, Rose."

"I don't think so," I said. "You and I are going to have an equal relationship. You don't get to dominate me, I'm a strong woman on my own and you better learn to accept it or your balls will be bluer than they are right now. So, are you going to behave?"

He was having to think about it, so I put one of the ice cubes under his balls and right above the vibrating plus. "YES! Yes, now please, love, I need you so bad..."

I climbed back on top of him, this time it didn't take as long to get all the way down. I didn't move up and down, I just massaged his length with my pussy as the vibrations from his butt plug worked their way from him into me. I could hear his breathing get quicker, he was getting close and so was I. I reached down and turned the knob to high. I didn't care that his heart rate was spiking, we were moving quickly to a climax and it was going to be huge. I started to move, raising my hips and slamming down on him until he screamed his pleasure as I joined him.

His cock got impossibly large, then started to come deep inside me. I was clenching him, sucking him farther up as he filled me with his seed. He normally gave me three or four jets of his hot jizz, but it just kept coming. I fucked him through it, the fluids pushing out around his shaft in a creamy froth until I finally collapsed on his good shoulder.

I reached back and pulled the plug out, earning another moan from him. "Fuck, that was intense," I said.

I laid there for a while, both of us recovering and enjoying the time together. I finally got up and went into the bathroom, cleaning myself then bringing a washcloth out to clean him, then the plug.

"Can you get this pillow out, baby? It's starting to get uncomfortable." I reached up and untied the blindfold, he relaxed until I forced it into his mouth and retied it as a gag. "Rmph ut arrr oo doooong?"

"I told you, your ass is mine tonight." I walked back to my bag and pulled out the strap-on dildo I had been given as a gag gift in college. It was black, about eighteen inches long and as big around as a coke can. His eyes went wide and he started to shake his head rapidly side to side. He started to struggle as I put the harness on and went to lube it up. "Really, Gunny? It proportional, just as big to your ass as your cock is to mine."

"Mmmph wwm"

"It's simple, Gunny. You shake your head yes, we're equals in bed and out, and I put this away. Say no, and I make you my bitch tonight." I pulled out my phone and started recording. "Now, Gunny, do you agree that your mate Rose is your equal in all things, that you will treat her that way in public and private, and that you love her more than life itself?" He quickly nodded his head yes, and I stopped recording.

The next morning, I was deliciously sore and satisfied as we awoke to my phone ringing. I untangled my limbs from his; I had untied him a long time before. I picked up the phone, seeing the time was 0632. Not much sleep.

The call was from the task force. "Rose, there's been another shooting, outside Kansas City."

"Oh God..."

"They found another Scrabble piece, Rose. Dropped on the street from where she shot from. It was a letter 'V,' 4 points. And there was a note written in Sharpie on the back." She paused. "It said, 'How many more, Renee?' in block letters."

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James_DuncanJames_Duncan12 months ago

Sorry but the last part with Rose and Gunny was rather off putting.

Ravey19Ravey19about 2 years ago

Don't have a clue, I'd have to read all the stories again. Great writing and an enjoyable read.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Every now and then using he/she in situation where there are more than one possible persons it could refer to.

But generally speaking you do know how to make a good story. So good that I am still reading even though I am not really into action.

LwcbyLwcbyover 3 years ago

1 star, if I could give it a.000001 star I would, I have read all of your works, and loved them until this fucking horrible fucked up bullshit!!!!! I don't know if you hate men or why you took a cool chick Rose and turned her into a piece of shit, but that was totally fucked up, rot in hell!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Not in Nebraska

A few flaws to be pointed out, should you ever decide to edit this into a book. If it is 40 degrees outside, there wouldn’t be corn in the fields. Maybe dead seed corn, but probably not, because Superior is so close to Kansas it would more likely be wheat. Also, there really aren’t many 4 way stop country roads. A typical farming family from Nebraska would be over weight Czechs, trust me on this one. Plus, kolaches, not danishes. Also, if you knew the mentality of this midwestern state, you would know they’d never, ever broadcast a murder video over local television. They’re too damn conservative, republican Christians.

OddBall68OddBall68over 6 years ago

Good for them. Congrats to whomever it was. Come on Lit reviewer(s) we need more approved chapters.

partwolfpartwolfover 6 years agoAuthor
Contest mentioned earlier is over

A reader has solved the puzzle of what the scrabble pieces mean.

OddBall68OddBall68over 6 years ago

Thinking more on the Kim Corrigan idea. Both legs could be amputated which could play into the truck used in 2 of the murders. Trucks and vans are best to modify for a cripple. With the bag of money left by her, she could have afforded to buy a wheelchair accessible vehicle. Might also explain the shots taken from roads and alleys with quick vehicular escape. That money would also cover flights, food or fuel expenses without popping up on credit sweeps. Interesting coincidence, which is probably nothing, but Ella's truck was originally red.

Who else would be high on a personal vengeance list? Enrique, Maria and Caleb. Let's say Kim also wants the war restarted hoping to kill all Weres and get access to the buried money again. All Weres are probably identified now so if it came to a fight the feds know all the individual targets and their packs. Two of the most valuable targets short of alphas would be Enrique and Josh. Their skills have saved the day before and threaten anyone moving against Weres.

It might be interesting to see what knowledge or special skills the killed Weres had. Might be nothing, but if they also had important knowledge and abilities it could show a pattern as well as show a sniper's mindset. Officers, communications, heavy weapons and so on down the list in importance.

OddBall68OddBall68over 6 years ago

partwolf,

I thought luv2's idea was bizarre but a theory is a theory. The human smell problem could actually have been explained away rather easily. Ok, scratch that theory Luv2, got any more?

Shame my points idea was a flop as well. Darn it. Would have been cool for the bad woman to taunt them once they figured out she had given a line. Oh well i guess.

Are the letters, and thusly the words, at least in order as you have written? TTTHHRMSLV Or was that just a grouping in letter quantity order as it appears? That isn't even in the order as discovered in the story. I don't think that order is from the oldest to newest murder. I would think the chronological murder order would determine the message. Without that, it's virtually pointless unless she planned it wouldn't be pieced together until she had murdered enough for every letter of every word to be found and juggled until the message was formed.

Discovered order - TTHTHRMSLV

Ella's pack, Renee's pack, Telluride, Cascade, Adirondack, Gunny shot, Superior, Kansas City

The actual murder chronology is different i think.

Anonymous,

I don't think Kim was under rocks small enough to be moved by hand. It could, of course, be checked on. Should be a decayed corps laying there with that knife or just a severed leg if i remember that part correctly.

partwolfpartwolfover 6 years agoAuthor
For luv2readlit

It can't be Linda Remington. Craig scented the killer, she was human not werewolf, and since they had met before he would have recognized the scent.

Figure out the puzzle and you get the answer, points are meaningless you have to figure out what the letters form and you have no vowels yet.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Kim Corrigan?

In 'Between the Were Wars' Ch.6 Kim Corrigan's body was never mentioned as being found, William Post did asked for a pardon for her death, but as far as I could tell she was just "missing". She was never searched for and stripped of a phone. She could have painstakingly removed stones one by one until she freed herself or waited and phoned for help. She would certainly hold a grudge, be of the right age, know she was "officially" dead and have $$ and IOU help from the cartel. With plastic surgery, or just good makeup an a wig, and changing her name and photo on her real DEA ID, she could fly with a gun.

OddBall68OddBall68over 6 years ago

Luv2,

I'll tip my hat if your right but that would not be a pleasant turn. I think the drama level is going to go through the roof as it is without such a core betrayal.

OddBall68OddBall68over 6 years ago

Of course the no vowels were noticed. Scrabble isn't my thing so I don't have a clue at the moment. The point values are perhaps interesting. It does sort of form a phone number but with a service code. 111-441-3114.

Luv2read2,

That is a twisted theory. It goes counter to the character in everything. You've just turned her into Senator Palpatine. Hiding in the background waiting to execute order 66. LOL Only 2 there are, a master and an apprentice. (yoda voice) lol

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
My guess about the killer

Linda Remington

I know, I know - Craig smelled the lady killer and as he has met Linda, he would have known her, but didn't identify her. (They met when Linda interviewed Ella and Craig when they were hiding on the island.)

She's known Renee for a long time, and has helped her in the past - and could have killed her already, as Linda's had ample opportunities. But as true revenge, she wants Renee to suffer.

So why do I think it's Linda?

1) She was Capt. Johnson's girlfriend before he met Renee and mated her. In fact, Linda was surprised/shocked when Renee was introduced as "his wife".

2) She was turned were by her mate Andy, who scented her as his mate - but does Linda love Andy as much as he loves her?

3) She's intelligent and would know all about weres.

4) Enrique could be helping her as he was forcibly turned by his mate, when he was in danger of losing his life (theory being that as a were, he'd be able to heal). Did Enrique really want to be turned (even though he's apparently crazy for his mate)?

5) Yes, I know she has no sniper experience, nor does Enrique (I think), BUT she's well known enough, and trusted, for the 16-year-old girl to roll down her window to talk to Linda.

6) As to moving around, if not Enrique, could Andy (Linda's mate) be helping her? I would think he's loyal to weres, but he was booted from his pack (by Derek, Renee's brother) for turning Linda without the Alpha's (Derek's) permission. He and Linda then joined Renee's pack, but could that have led to resentment?

I do know there's more holes in my theory (never mind that I haven't figured out the Scrabble clues), but Linda is an intriguing possibility, no?

luv2read2

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Letters

Has anyone else noticed that there are no vowels in all of the tiles? SO, at this point they can't make any English words.

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