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When he showed up, I realized why she didn't want to tell me who her first suck was with. When I answered the door, I opened it to find her father standing there with a dozen roses. This was gonna' be some Valentine's night, I thought as I slid my arm into his and walked him into the house. It was gonna' be some night indeed.
- COMMENTS
Morlan502about 12 years agoI think I have found, yet again, another writer here on Lit that I must regularly check on for new stories!
Averygoodlayabout 12 years agoGreat story, but could have had a little more detail, dads blowjob, eating eachothers pussy,and such.
Anonymousabout 12 years agoThis Really needed more details. It just seems very unfinished. Also, it was so obvious that the person that Rosie blew was her own father.
imurddyabout 12 years agoI normally like more detail, but I understand deadlines. It was still a great read. I would love to read an updated version. Good luck in the contest, I gave you a five.
EesomeBeastieabout 12 years agoI love the tongue-in-cheek nature of this story. And as for the ultra-abbreviated threesome, well, surprisingly it does really work very well. I was so worked up by that point that those few words were all that was needed for my imagination to fill in the rest. 5 stars.
Scaramouche123about 12 years agoAuthorAs a writer, I'm never too bored with my story to cut it short. However, I thought the contest had one more day than it did. When I went to copy the text from the contest rules, I realized I only had 5 hours to write a short story. I thought; "no problem." But, alas, as sometimes happens, the story took off and became more than I could finish.
I'll do what I can to finish properly in the coming weeks. But my schedule is really tough this time of year. Thanks for reading...
Anonymousabout 12 years agoIt was going along great. Then boom just a list of acts???? Did you get bored with your own story????
