All Comments on 'Rosie Comes Out'

loved it it was amazing

Hope we hear of the continuing adventures for all involved.

I loved the story. I liked the plot twist at the end.

The continuity is terrible; you kept screwing up who was who! You need someone to proofread before you post.

Loved it - slightly jealous though!

Great story look forward to some more

Loved it definetly jealous of Rosie.

Beautiful story. I loved it, it's like a dream

Loved the story. It was great to have such a long story on here. Don't worry about the anonymous literary critic. It would be fantastic to hear what happens with Carmen and Rosies relationship. Keep writing

A couple errors with peoples names but a great story. I enjoyed Rosie’s growth and look forward to a continuation with Rosie, Carmen, Sam and Melly. THank you for your contributions to the site.

Love it, had me wanting to get a pedicure and manicure done along with getting my ears pierced.

You could stand to do proofreading. But a very enjoyable story even if it was difficult to follow when you mixed up names of characters here & there

This was one of the absolute best stories I’ve ever read on here please continue with these characters so much more can be told about them!