All Comments on 'Rough Seas'

That's a family I'd like to be a member of.

5*****

And more chapters would be good.

Covered so much I'm not sure what a second chapter could add, except maybe the girls teaming up with Aunt Charly/Mom.

Get it all out in the open and become a free use family. But Aunt Charly has to announce a false alarm if you do a part two.

More please... would love to see a 5some with everyone involved :)

Great introduction of characters and plot

It’s time Hanna has her dads baby

This was hot as fuck. You only needed to have some girl on girl to fill it out. One sentence that said 'when I needed a break, the girls tended to each others' needs', doesnt count. Taylor seems to be the instigator of it all, so why change things? Have her seduce Charly, and end up sitting on her face. And I so disagree that if there's a part two, and I hope there is, that Charly should have a false alarm. Pregnant sex is hot. Five stars and really hope you add on.

Jedd

but damn you need an Editor. All the misspelled or left out words were extremely distracting. Good charachter development and dialogue. Decent sex scenes. Not overly descriptive. I love to read a sequel.

3 stars

DragonRider55

Good story.

I felt a lot of emotion in it.

Thank You!

Hot, sweet and sexy! Loved it!

Loved it, more please! I am very wet wanting Daddy and Uncle fucking me!

Very hot! Loved it! Five stars and a favorite point!

Great story and great set up for a part 2

Awesome start, needs a part 2!!

The fantasy was ruined when Moe was added to the incest party. Not a fan of sharing.

I'm expecting in part 2 that we'll learn that Moe had a vasectomy years before.

Great storey looking forward to part 2.

Very GOOD STORY the best was HANNA & her small boobs & Daddy Wade fucking her !!It is just my Preference TALL SLIM girl with small boobs A cup or even FLAT CHESTED !!

It was fun and sexy until Moe and Charly were brought in. All the tension was gone and it became silly. (moreso than it would have been already)

I think the author would be better served by letting dad and the girls continue on their precarious story and stopping without bringing anyone else in. He could bring Moe & Charly into a part 2 story and expand from there, but keep it simple. I've read many times that it takes a good writer or editor some chops to know when the story is done.

just great. A dream come true in one mind.