All Comments on 'Rowan Ch. 01'

It's a touching story and I'm shocked and surprised that there aren't many compliments on it. Count my comment as a vote for your writing. Since it's so long after your submission I hope you find it. jesse

Preserving the sweet and innocent nature of a common tale/fantasy within the story formation and content, you've given without taking. Nicely done.

first two very good -are you ever going to continue?

Sadly I don't have the time to write as much as I would like...one day I will add another chapter. :)

I loved this, just loved it to bits. Oh the way you describe them coming together, the emotions evoked, the memories - and now the anticipation of the next chapter. You kept me reading, and I am on to chapter 2 at once!

Hot story!! Love to have watched that session.