by astuffedshirt_perv
Very erotic story with great detail. Hmm, now where can I buy one of these.
I have read the original and have to say yours is a great add-on. It runs a bit slow but very detailed and a great read.
This part makes absolutely no sense, and it honestly just gets exponentially more ridiculous with each line.
"I...how long is a cycle? I mean, how long is a cycle, ma'am?"
"Forty eight hours when run continuously."
"Eight days?" Karen exploded. "I can't miss work for two weeks!"
48 hours is 2 days, so even if there were two cycles it would still only be 4 days.
Also, 8 days is not two weeks.
I'm embarrassed I never caught the 48 hours is 2 days not 4 error! However, I went with 8 days is two weeks rather than "over a week". I guess I should have used "over a week".
To get it off, cut it off. Anyone of several tools would do the job, no problem. The rest was just a trainwreck.