All Comments on 'Ruinous Shackles'

A very good one, nicely written, fantastic plot. Ummm I've had a few Pastis but I could not find a grammatical error. 5* Well done

I was seriously penning a chiding comment in my head regarding starting another epic story with no end, then you threw another few paragraphs on with that bar scene, and turned it into a real story (that is, one with a climax /and/ a denouemont). That little bit was actually a stroke of genius, not just for wrapping the story up, but for surprising all your fans.

I hope you take this as a compliment, even if there is a bit of playful ribbing mixed in with it. Good job, 5*

P.S. - I'll be damned for mentioning this, but you did just set up the basis for a truly interesting epic story. If you didn't already have 4 or 5 of those started here on Lit, I would suggest you run with this one. There is something that I truly love about stories that break down religion, and having a sci-fi setting around a fictitious ancient religion would be a lot of fun to read.

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i enjoyed the shit out of that. thank you.

Great story, so much fun. I love that their marriage is fun and playful and fresh after all the centuries together. Makes me all jealous inside.

Thank you!

Super, one of my favorite stories of all time. Just magnificent.

What a way to go through the rest of your life, and then some. Great story with a happy ending. Thanks