by luvjuice43
cuts through all the posturing and deviousness that can poison a relationship. I liked the hero better as a peer than as a benevolent despot (in the original story from earlier that evening! ) Where is this bar???
And a fitting sequel it is. A very good, well written pair of nicely erotic stories.
An interesting story line and especially good depiction of the attractions of the smells and tastes of sex.
Perfect completion for a sequel .... love the form of writing can see in my mind the two people enjoying each other.. well done
awesome. i can't believe the opportunities that exist if one pays attention. i wished i had that aggression when i was younger.
well done, will, or what ever your name is. i have enjoyed every one of the stories i have read so far.
however, i'm still waiting for the finish of Ronnie, her daughter, Marie & Marlene. there was a long way to go in that story. i'm posting this here because this other comment is only one month old & hopefully, the author will see it.