All Comments on 'Run Ch. 03'

fantastic story. i can't wait to read more about these kids.

I was definitely thankful to log on tonight and unexpectedly find a new installment of Run. You're crafting an excellent story here, and as a big fan of Lost in Texas (one of my top 2 or 3 favorite stories since I started browsing this site more than five years ago) and All Ashore, I see some nice recurring strains but its still pretty unpredictable (probably more so than those stories.) This is unquestionably quality erotic reading, but I love your stories for being more than that. I'm a fan of great storytelling and you've got a knack. By the way, in all the time I've been at Literotica, this is the first time I've ever posted feedback. Good work and keep 'em coming.

I'm finding the characters in this fascinating and realistic.

And finding all of them quite sympathetic. Even Pat's Mom and Dad are understandable, and rather pitiable.

Very nice piece of work, Evil.

Well done

like this series alot so far

just thrown off by a few details;

1. her excercise routine is not humanly possible

2. her diet is not the one that an athlete of that caliber would have--if she worked out that much, she would have the metabolism and appetite of a horse

You are one of the few writers on the site that can write f/f stuff that I will enjoy reading. Pat definitely is going to have to break away from her dad's mold and strike out on her own. I wonder if she's ever given any real thought to what she would like to do with her life.<br><br>

I hope the Friday date goes well. The tournament should be interesting too.

i don't know why this is on the top list

The switching between characters and across town is really great, different stories al yet the intertwine. Keep going