All Comments on 'Run Ch. 04'

Talk about one hell of a cliffhanger! I definitly cant wait to see the next one!

What a gripping story you have written. What a great risk we all take raising children. So many possibilities for greatness and tragedy.

Boyd

i prefer ru lesbian stories better. but eh.

Been looking forward to this one.

And now waiting desperately for the next.

A really fine piece of work, with rich characters and emotions.

Well done.

I love this story. But cliffhangers drive me insane... but I love this story... but cliffhangers...

*head asplodes*

cant wait for the next chapter but i have to say it was rather mean to leave us with that kind of a cliffhanger

I LOVE IT AND CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT ONE !!!!

I thought this was fantastic it brought tears to my eyes the emotion is so life like, i love how you are building it up the pace is great!!! keep it up cant wait to the next installment hope its soon!!!!!

... though it seemed destined for tragedy. Still, a beautiful, impressive piece.

Wow im crying....This is such an emotional story.

brilliant story. Definitely want everything to work out for Pat and Keith but frankly, Gail's my favourite character. Truely fantastic. Very moving, thoroughly gripping and extremely well written - keep it coming pleeease! ;)

I really wish I could write such engaging characters.

*applauds and then runs off to find Chapter 5*

We got major disfunction here...Being a parent and being clueless isn't bad in and of itself. Not waking up finally and smelling the damn coffee...is. Watching a family implode, fiction or not, is a grim experience. What a story...

I think we all saw it coming, it was the obvious way to go with this story, but it was still kinda touching nonetheless.

A very good and sweet heartbreaker.. But I will hope for the best to come for those still there.. cheers Yoron

didn't like

I didn't expect Buddy's death to come so quickly, though I had hoped for it. I didnt see him as anything other than a convenient plot device, since I'm a cruel bastard. I'm lovin reading the ensuing drama. Thing is, the story is about Pat and Buddy was in a way, part of the prison that her parents built around her.

justify a one star rate

Such character depth. I'm in awe of your storytelling skills. Right now my heart ... Aches for Pat. -pal

The depth of the characters and the fluidity in which you narrate between them is astonishing!

stupid self centered parents! keep writing!

Its mostly to late then knowledge and discovery hit us "........ This pages and buddys dead is horror and made my crying so badly ...... Its not a stoy no its reality which is hitting and that hurts ....... Thank you EvilAlpaca for sharing tour soul within your pages