All Comments on 'Run Your Fingers Through My Hair'

by VermillionVenusian

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Good premise.

Seems very hurried. ""Sorry, I've got no patience for much foreplay..." Why? Foreplay can be exceedingly erotic. Missed all those opportunities.

Three stars.

VermillionVenusianVermillionVenusianover 2 years agoAuthor

I forgot to include this at the top: thanks to M_R_ for helpful edits and comments!

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