by timmywells
Love your stories! This one made me mad! t wasn't because of the story itself but the reaction of the neighbors when they found out what happened to the kids. What kind of town treats a victim like that?
Your story took me back to my own youth complete with similar experiences. Very moving and I believe that is the hallmark of a good author. Please keep up the terrific work.
Are you going to share what happens once they arrive at their destination?
Sweet and emotional. Hope you'll take us further on their journey. It could be pretty hot having them go out together eventually...mistaken for father and son, until someone watched them more closely.
kuroukiphoenyx, believe it or not there are many a town's fine citizens who would think that Troy and Dustin deserved what they got.
Reminded me of when I turned 18 and had nowhere to go so I headed west and many men like frank have helped me to where I am now 20 and about to go to college to be a doctor