All Comments on 'Runaway Bride Returns'

by EgmontGrigor2021

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TonyspencerTonyspencerover 2 years ago

Very funny and entertaining.

nestorb30nestorb30over 2 years ago

Should be in humor and satire

someoneothersomeoneotherover 2 years ago

I had started reading with high hope that this would be a good story. But the writing is atrocious, and unbelievable that the woman could develop a business so quickly. So, unhappily, a 1*.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Functionally illiterate author... even the tags are full of typos.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Well, I liked the premise of the story that the two finally find each other after several years. It would have been easier to follow to know when she actually decided to come back instead of resorting to some kind of trickery (fainting at the gate in swoon to get him to pick her up). I would have liked to see him have more reaction to her telling the story of his mom telling her what would happen if she did marry him. He kind of just glosses over the telling. THen they kind of get it on with each other but no details of their first coupling. I liked the story but not sure of the closure. I guess they live HEA?

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