All Comments on 'Runaway Daughter'

I love reading this story, it is fantastic. All of your stories are great.

Great read. How about some more - perhaps a follow-on of some kind.

Not impossible , but rare to find 19 year old girls who don't know about sex and who wouldn't mind their Dad showing them the ropes . Nice fantasy .

really loved this story. the build up at the start and the flow through was excellent..........i just felt you rushed the ending and felt for the wasted opportunity. But all in all and really good story

me parecio una muy buena historia, creible , interesante , la trama al inicio muy bien trabajada, pero al final creo que se podria mejorar, fue muy rapido y se perdio la oportunidad de aumentar las descripciones y la "accion" con las hijas , igual se podria haber propuesto una escena lesbica con las tres adolescentes y tambien un menage a quatre muy incitante

i loved this story, very credible and interesting, the plot was well worked at start, but at the end i felt it quite rushed and incomplete. you lost the chance to make a better description on the daughters (bodies,etc) and the 'action' with their father. you may have written a lesbian scene on the three teens and also a foursome... very inciting

i believe you deserve a 88% and i encourage you to keep writing and hope to read more of your brain works.

greetings from Mexico

this was one hot story!!! I have always liked the idea of love and lust with a parent... this was a step up from that with the addition of Leah. will you continue the story? marriage? baby or babies? hoping and looking forward to more:)

Not so bad :) - Or even a very good - you can say :)))

Well..

- Very.. 'imaginative' and interesting :)) I like it !!

Written smoothly and engagingly.. Way to go!

Ok, i had to stop in the middle of this one to post. I love the story, i really do! But you're fucking murdering me with adjectives !! Waaaaay too many in every sentence to the point of also being syrupy! ...other than that i love it and its very creative! ...now, back to where i left off! :). (Keep writing!!)

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When neither of us could stand it anymore, I plunged my throbbing manhood deep into her beckoning love canal in one long glorious thrust.

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Well I guess it worked out that she didnt have any nasty hymen getting in the way and wasnt overly small, otherwise ramming it in, even soaking wet, might have gotten a totally different reaction, lol ;)

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I followed soon after in what was one of my most fantastic orgasms ever, as I pumped Leah's juicy little pussy full of my cum. This was an all time high for me and I soared in my orgasmic euphoria for a long time, savoring the unique satisfaction of such an incredibly tight and totally fantastic fuck. My cock stung for many hours from the tightness of our union, reminding me again and again of how wonderful it had been. A great fuck, a tight fuck, a true joining of our souls in commune.

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...the story is pretty interesting...but...is it just me or does it read really weird? Everything is put together correctly, but its like english isn't the authors primary language or something...

...well, guess she might be getting pregnant, lol. His cock stung?? Ive fucked women till they were too sore to continue but my dick never stung, lol. ...also I think he was writing it like they were making love but he keeps saying fuck constantly, kinda ruins the mood. One or the other I think...

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They soaked their panties with their juices of pleasure and rubbed themselves to orgasm again and again, as they became overwhelmed with desire. They could barely contain their lust for me. Of course they told all of this to me later.

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...I swear, Im going to scream if I get to the end of this page and there isn't a chapter two to read!! :)

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"I have a favor to ask on behalf of your daughters." She stated their request so sweetly that I couldn't refuse. "They are dying to learn about sex and really want you to teach them like you taught me. I don't object. I think you should. It will be really hot and fun for us all."

And who could resist such a request under such circumstances anyway. I know it is very wrong to fuck your own daughters, but they are both nineteen and adult enough to know what they want. Besides I felt good about being the one to teach them about sex properly. Goodness knows what they would learn on their own in this crazy world.

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Hell, no sane man could refuse that! She's already broken him down and got him used to having sex with his 'other daughter' so the idea just fires off his endorphins when he thinks about it now, lol. Look at the pluses, you get to fuck your three girls, together (woo!;), they all live with you now (buy stock in vitamins and viagra daddy!;), AND you get to stick it to the ex-bitch at the same time! Win win for everyone.. Well except the ex, hehehe :). Hell, I'd kill to be in his shoes, lol!

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Too many first time experiences are full of grief and disappointment, but I knew I could provide them with a wonderful first time experience and thus assure them a healthy sexual outlook for the future.

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...honestly, I think this is too true. Pretty much all of my girlfriends and my girl friends, had crappy first times, a number of them didn't have good sex for a while. Some of them had never had good-great sex until me. (Girlfriends and friends with benefits) call me funny, but I get off on making a girl happy, heh. I didnt find out till way later (dammit! Missed opportunities!!) but the small circle of women gossiped about who they have had sex with and who was good, etc... My name came up and a few chimed in, I think they decided to sort of pass me around between them. They were pretty slick about it too! ;)

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I honestly felt good about it and didn't agonize over it at all.

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...well imagine that! A daddy thats not being a whiny douche about it, refreshing!! Hehehe:)

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Tricia was even more demanding, insisting that I fuck her and take her virginity, "Right now." I accepted her insistent request and soon plunged my very hard and very large cock into Tricia's very tight pussy, causing many wonderful vocal manifestations of her love for me to burst forth from her mouth. She was beside herself in the wonders of her first fuck, relishing and ravishing me, in the height of her seemingly unlimited passion.

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...dont get me wrong, I love the story and it's a lot of fun, but you just have to laugh at some of this! "He rammed into my virgin, never touched before pussy with his big dick and it was like candy and chocolate and birthday cake all rolled together, so smooth and creamy and delicious!!" Rofl! (Rolling eyes). How about "FUCK!! Daddy!! Why did you just ram it in?! What the fuck is wrong with you?! That hurts like hell and burns daddy! How would you like me to squirt some baby oil up your butt and then just ram an eight inch dildo up your ass?! Lets try it, hold him down girls!!" Hehehe.

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Hardly an hour went by that one of them wasn't showing a pouty or lust-crazed face in her desire for me to satisfy her.

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Time to buy the girls a strap-on or two to give yourself a bit of breathing room ;)

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But there was another concern and that was their likely pregnancy. My two daughters fortunately were on the pill, but Leah wasn't, so this was a very real concern for me.

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Aha, it was addressed! Well I guess we all knew Leah would want his babies ;)

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Needless to say, I don't spend much time at my businesses any more. I mostly stay at home with my three wonderful daughters and continuously and thoroughly ravish them, day and night, over and over again.

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What a horrible fate! Aaah, it's good to be the boss :)

Well over all that was a pretty fun story!! I wish the ending with the daughters had been a lot longer, taking time with each one, then maybe all together! Thanks for writing for us!!

a great story filled with love for a young girl and his daughters.

why did you stop writing? you are a very talented writer.

I didn't log in so this will be anonymous. But this is Venus_Lover. Sometimes life gets in the way of our hobbies or important things require our time. Health is a factor also. Anyway, the only editors I could find after long searches kept insisting on more sex in the articles. It is literotica after all. I am more into the feelings than the sex, not that I'm not into the sex also. I had to change countries suddenly and left all my unfinished articles behind unfortunately and just don't have the energy to start them all from scratch. I am looking forward to one day getting back to an almost finished big story about the daughter of a Navy SEAL who really kicks ass and her daughter, ditto. Great story with a lot of exciting things going on, like, as George Clooney's bodyguard, taking out a huge brute at the Academy Awards. Well, yeah, as I said its a great story (at least in the authors opinion if that counts). I will probably write another shorter spinoff. Stay tuned, I'm still out here. Oh and yeah, some of the comment feedback for some of my articles was downright brutal and that turned me off big time. Theres a lot of dumb wankers out there who criticize everything and everything just cuz they can. The internet is anonymous so its easy to vent ones frustrations in life anonymously. Hey, I could be anyone posting this comment. But I'm not.

It is a shame a talented writer like Venus_Lover quits writing particularly because of the Anon's who mostly have never written a word seem to take pleasure in trashing a good author because they can and then the lack of editors who would not edit his work to help him but try to get him to change his writings. Personally I like this author's writing and hope he will come back some say and publish more of his stories. As far as this story it was well written and deserves a 5 star score

Excellent story and waiting for continuation.