All Comments on 'Running Away Ch. 01'

Very Nicely written Subhashini.

You've got the humour bit going - can't wait till the Sex starts.

Part 2 in the works ? :-)

Am curious about one aspect -

Why would Subhashini use Tony & Bella instead of Tarun & Bindiya ?

( I wasn't being critical, just curious )

I'll look forward to your next instalment.

Yea the second chapter is pending review. and there will hopefully be more than just two.

I wanted to keep this one region-independent, though I have plans to write desi stories too.

loving it so far, please continue.. can't wait to see what happens