All Comments on 'Running into Trouble'

Good start, would like to see a sequel, Oh dear mummy and daughter both in the club.

usually one runs away from turmoils except for long distance training going awry, TK U MLJ LV NV

Very yummy indeed! You know you left the ending with another chapter in mind; so please continue this story and let us see where you take them... Thank you!

I could see the ending before it was announced. Hope all goes well in the next chapter

I loved it. Neat idea and well written.

You DID run into trouble! and all of us out here are waiting for the next chapter! or is it "for the OTHER shoe to fall" ?

First, praise: Well-written and enjoyable. 5 stars. Now the comment. I was concerned about how the school and the community prudes were going to react to the unmarried pregnant English teacher. How would that be addressed? And I admit I still am interested in that. But now we have mother and daughter both pregnant by the same man. How do they handle that? Is there some way to marry both women? I guess not. Will will marry Connie to save her career (perhaps - as long as not too many people count the months from the marriage to the birth!). Helen will be able to move on because she'll be out of Venezuela in a few months. How the family dynamic will work is up in the air. Tune in next week for the next explosive episode of the new soap opera hit, "Running into Trouble".

The twist at the end made this a keeper! NOW...how about a chapter 2?

Ok this is a 5 plus stars! Needs another chapter(s) ASAP! Thank for it.

Never stay in a pool when it's lightning. Thanks for sharing

This is a very good story and well written. Hope you keep the tale going to give us all more to enjoy. Well done.

And, keep them from fucking in a swimming pool when it is lightning. It could fry their asses.

A very good story..........Continue.

Don't leave us hanging next Chapter

Please more!

Wow great punchline. You can't leave us high and dry, there are more chapters surely. Please continue this superbly written story.

You are a horrible person! You come up with this excellent plot twist and then leave us hanging. I did not see that coming.

But, thanks for the great stories and the many many ways of describing sex and love-making. And in all the stories so far, I don't think you used "rock-hard" once; major kudos! You have a great style.

loved it except for the ending, we need to know how this progresses. Do they end up as a trio living together and raising babies? Please write some more.

SC delivers with snappy prose and a great story. Obviously a runner, but 3:45 for a first marathon is too good to be true for a 45 yo woman. Training advice was good, though. Only a very confident author could write 'pulled my inflated pole into her ravenous hole' and get away with it. Criticisms: nobody goes to Venezuela for employment unless they are nuts. And why didn't Helen write Will and explain her imminent maternity? The story begs for a chapter two but I can't figure out how to reconcile mother-daughter pregnancies by the same father. Wow! Maybe relocate to southern Utah. (A friend in HS knocked up two girls at the same time, but this is way worse, socially/legally. We called him 'super-dad'.)

Saw that one coming but it was worth it.

I loved it. Romantic, erotic, energetic and yes very sexy. God, I want more of this tale. Great story.

There had better be another chapter. Otherwise, all your wonderful storytelling and hot sex will fail to counteract the disappointment.

Saying “The End” does not mean it’s the end of a story... You the author have to actually wrap everything up to completion. You did anything but. This great story is worthy of an additional entry if not several.

Love the story. Well written. Had a feeling Helen would show up pregnant too. Maybe it is the guy in me but I can't see why they're are both upset. I would really love to see how it ends!!! I'm a true sucker for a happy ending!!!

How can you do that to me, you are such a tease.

So, will it be "Daddy, Daddy" or "Grandfather, Grandfather" or both ??

Didn't expect that ending. Sequel?

Wonderful romantic and funny.

There has to be a sequel!

😅🤣😂Good twist!

Now this ending was worth 5 stars.

OMG! MOAR!

The building of intimacy with two women was excellent, the forlorn remembrance of love lost or languished, and the building of love, and then, BAM!

MOAR!

Great story but there really needs to be a sequel.

That’s what you can get without safe sex…..

Nice story full of good descriptions and very nice characters and a well thought out ending , good one.

Please, a sequel.

Preferably a happy ending.

I loved this story up until the ending. The ending changed everything! Now the joy of pregnancy will be gone, maybe for both soon to be mothers.