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Click hereThe green became brown and Dominic had to focus hard to realize the coolness of his back was the ground. They had laid him down just off the path, leaving him there. Would they come back? He couldn't see, he couldn't move very well. His entire body was nothing but pain and fire-
"DOMINIC!"
Dominic's eyes startled open, racing back and forth until the green and brown became gold. He focused on the gold, praying for the pain in his body to stop.
"Just breath. Just take a deep breath and let it out. Let everything out."
Doing as the eyes said, Dominic took in a shaky breath. As his chest expanded, another wave of pain surged forward and everything went black. He wasn't sure if he ever let out that breath.
- COMMENTS
tiercenptover 3 years agoahh feel like there are a lot of self conflicted issues they have.
and story seems to be "beat-around-the-bush" kind of style.
It's now chapter 19 everyone of the destined mates had made a connection except Dom...
also there's potential for so much more story if you somehow get to the point in all those little storylines.
BlueWolfDancer4454over 7 years agoAuthorChapter 20 is finished and sent to the editors! Once I get it back and fixed (which should be any day now) I will post it. Nothing in it that would set off any alarms, so fingers crossed you guys should have a new chapter next week. Love you all and thank you for your patience :D
Anonymousover 7 years agoI know you're busy, and I'm not rushing you because I know how it feels to not get to do the things you want because you're too busy. But if you're just feeling discouraged about your writing, know that we're all excited to see chapter 20!!
ChasingtheSkyover 7 years agoLooking forward to your next chapter! You have done such a good job developing these characters!
I would understand if the next chapter took awhile, because I have done seasonal work myself, and you have my support.
That being said, I will check back weekly to see if there are any new updates.
Anonymousover 7 years agoI'm dying waiting for chapter 20! I check everyday morning and night for the new upload! If you have a chance PLEASE HURRY, I'm going crazy waiting!
payenbrantover 7 years agoWell, I have come to the end of this tale so far. I have thoughts, but it will be better for me to send those as feedback.
For now, we'll written, and you have developed a good sense on how to create life hangers.
Sincerely,
Payenbrant
Anonymousover 7 years agoto know what Dominic will do. Honestly, I don't really think he can take Sol and Orion, unless they have some sort of handicap, but I'm perfectly happy to be proven wrong!
