by Manasong
Thank you for the new chapter. Please write more! As I said last chapter, this could easily be self-published to Amazon (once finished).
This is dmso funny, was only 3 days ago I finished the last one and was super disappointed that there wasn't more. so great, hope you keep it up!
I'm still really confused why he hasn't tried out a single one of the growth skills he talked about even during training in the guild...... Is there any particular reason or the MC just stupid?
You can look at chapter 1 again. I've removed [Increased Growth] and [Inspire Growth] does nothing to him, so forget about them.
LOVIN' this. I wished you had put something like " be warned, slow burn" for the sex. Buuuut it's pretty damm great. I love the way that you've made his thought processes pretty distinct from that of the locals. Case in point the SPIDERS. and this thread you've made with the goddess of knowledge is REALLY interesting. Definitely run with that plz. In summary I love your work, it's a bit rough in places ( you might wanna get someone to pre read it for spell check btw) but definitely worth the read. I can't wait for the next chapter and I hope you do Release it
Found the story with way more chapters than this one on RoyalRoad, same author same name, might want to head over there for the continuation
That part about fire and water combined = explosion is stupid, it should be fire and wind. Also can the mc stop being such a stupid pussy about dark magic please?
The story is just starting to get good and moving along well. Please don't leave your readers hanging. There needs to be a chapter 7, 8, and 9+
Please continue what you started.
Thank you.