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caramelcreamcaramelcreamabout 8 years ago
Awesome Story

I always love these stories. Hot and Sweet. Quite enjoyable. Thanks!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago

This was a really great read.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Good story

but please get it edited and it will be amazing. Your verb tenses are all over the place between present and past...

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
HURDLED, not HURTLED

edit and spellcheck

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
You lost me at Gruffy

Sorry

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago

Great story! I loved it

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Sherry

Grammar Nazis are such assholes. Great story!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Wow!

That's all I can really say! It was too much to take in all at once, but very action-packed, indeed!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

While the story is not bad, the writing is. Just full of errors.

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